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lol I hope Mac gets to live if they get found out...

strangely enough I like the story. This story seems to be off to a fun start. Nico is the classics choolgirl type who finna fall madly in love with Mimi. But then the strain of the relationship with his bosses only son. Yeah. Different. I look forward to seeing how you plan this out

I feel for both Nico and Miroslav this chapter. Nico because school sucks (though the girl and his cluelessness? Yeah, that was funny) and Miroslav because he has to deal with a nickname that he doesn't like, since Nico finds him easier to talk to than Yacov.
Another wonderful chapter, thank you! And as always, I'm looking forward to reading more.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

lol poor Nico...having to deal with a crush already :P

I love Nico's attitude and can't wait to read more soon.

lmao Mimi :P

Awesome, Im already super interested! Currently Waiting excitedly for the next chapter.

Another interesting chapter. I like the nervous first-time parent thing Yakov is having problems with, and that Miroslav is acting as both a balance between them and as a caring person trying to help estranged family create a relationship. It's a neat take, though obviously Yakov and Miroslav and the others of their group are no strangers to violence. The caseworker's concern was amusing, in one way, but also could easily have been taken as the kind of challenge to a mafia boss that could easily result in death or disgrace, I think. It felt like a fine line to walk, at least to me.
Malls. Shopping. Ugh. I completely empathize with Nicolai on this; I'm too much a tomboy to enjoy shopping just to shop. Don't get me started on clothes and shoes; I go for the simple things there, too. Formal clothes...yeah, I avoid uniforms wherever possible. And I think most people hate school, so there's another point to help readers connect with Nicolai's character.
Overall, this is a much lighter chapter than the first, but I guess as the story develops further, we'll see how far it goes.
Looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

Aw, another chapter! I love how he's interaction with them. I think he should she a psychologist or something? Because being pimped out as a teenager must have some negative effect on a person...Wondering how he'd react to a suggestion like that! XD
Cannot wait for more!

It's nice to see Nico is acting just like a typical teenager and doesn't seem to have been affected at all by his past experiences. At least, I don't think he is but time will tell.