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by Blanche_Conrad

person Katniss Evergreen
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What a sly and devious devil or rather matchmaker Bill the Tailor is turning out to be. I just hope the shit doesn't hit the fan and Corbin's dad discovers that his son is wearing or later that he wore a corset to the charity ball. I am freaking out wondering what's going to happen especially when Ewan discovers what Corbin is wearing under his clothes, lol.
person Jayden
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Happy Valentine's Day!

Oh, I loved how Ewan was fantasizing about Corbin in a corset! Oh my gosh, this will make him dislike the blonde English Sassenach even more, lol.
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Grrr - AFF ate TWO of my reviews!!!! I hate these fucking Captcha things. Why the hell are they even here???? I just want to leave a review. Man, I'm so pissed.

Ok, maybe third time's the charm: Now I have to calm down before I write. Ok...Corbin copped such an attitude with Cole and with the car salesman. He needed Tammy to put him in his place. lol

I'm looking forward to the charity ball where Corbin will be so surprised to see the Scot. Sparks are sure to fly when they see each other. lol
person OrangeSmoke
schedule February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa~! It's Cole and Dare! Yay! Mmmm... And Cole is even being super manly and recognizing a squeaky door's need for oil. You know though... I wish Cole and Dare had held hands at the car dealership... That would have been nice. Ooc? Maybe. But nice.

Corbin is being surprisingly bratty though. I can understand the behavior in the first part of the chapter, it makes sense for his character thus far. I was really surprised by his behavior at the car dealership though! Mister money-bags stuck up young man!

Also- The part about Corbin being delicate and willowy like a pre-pubescent girl? Priceless. Especially the tailor wanting to make him a ball gown. No, especially Ewan fantasizing about Corbin in a corset! Yay for cross-dressing manporn!

Favorite line: "Ewan made a choking noise in the back of his throat as he imagined the petite blonde boy wearing a corset."

This is such a good story! Please update quickly! I can't wait for the charity ball- I'm super excited.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was nice seeing Cole and Dare again even if they were somewhat in the background. I agree with OrangeSmoke and it would have been nice to see them holding hands or sharing a moment but it would be somewhat OOC for them I guess. I can't get that image out of my mind of Ewan picturing Corbin in a corset, I agree it was priceless.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi Blanche, I have to admit I was getting worried about you so was very relieved to find a message you had updated this story in my inbox. I didn't see anything that was super-awkward, so no worries. As usual, no complaints, just keep the updates coming. I am getting kind of antsy to read more of Corbin and Ewan's unusual meetings but the suspense of thinking about what kind of sparks will fly is worth the wait. I think Ewan has been struck by cupid and doesn't realize it yet. Update soon, I am dying to find out how the charity ball goes.
person snowleopard
schedule February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing another update. I am really having fun reading this new story and both Ewan and Corbin make me smile.
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so happy you updated and hope you are feeling better! Congrats on getting Moonlight and Stained Glass published, that is so super awesome and I am happy for you.

Awe, poor Corbin! It wasn't nice of Cole calling him a brat even though he deserved it.

Oh, Ewan deserved to get stuck with a pin for having naughty thoughts of Corbin in a corset, lol.

I still can't wait for Corbin's reaction to seeing Ewan in a kilt for the first time.
person Orangesmoke5270
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I found the second chapter! Ooh- this is getting good. I loved Ewan giving Corbin's instructor tips on how to teach. I'm sad that their week in romantic Taos, NM is over already. Also- this chapter was short. That's very sad. I'm already hooked, so please update soon! I can't wait for the charity ball!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Blanche, I was just over in the forum reading stuff and saw this post from you; I would like to delete one of my stories but can't find that option in my control panel or editing panel. I hope you are not deleting this one but think maybe it's Moonlight and Stained Glass because you might be getting it published. I hope it's not this one because then I would literally freak out, lol. I guess I am just panicking that you are going to disappear from here like other authors tend to do lately.