rate_review Reviews

Well, you seem to have forgotten those who have been faithful in reading/reviewing your story. I feel very neglected and just hope you are well and nothing bad happened.

Um, I hope you are alright! I am sort of disappointed that you don't update that often because I really like it. It's a always a real downer every time I find a story I like I have to wait months or even worse years for an update. Cringes.

Please update. My life sucks lately so I've been living vicariously through fictional characters. Please pause your busy life to make mine better :)

I loved it and the wait made it all the more special. I do think that Ewan sometimes forget just how young and innocent Corbin really is. Ewan showed a different side to himself in this chapter that I hope doesn't escalate into something worse BUT I don't think it will. Both Corbin and Ewan seem to taunt each other which led up the bathroom incident. Damn, that Ewan is a cruel Scot, walking off with that girl after accosting him in the bathroom!

Wow...Just- ... wow. There are so many things that I love about this chapter, I hardly know where to begin. First of all, favorite quote "You're practicing naming your colors." My goodness. That was hysterical. Second of all..... I forgive you for being late with this chapter because the bathroom scene was so intense. Well, the whole chapter, really. I loved Ewan's reaction to feeling the corset on Corbin. I loved how straightforward Ewan was in explaining the situation to Corbin about the tailor and his meddling.

I had mixed feelings about the way Ewan got physical with Corbin... I know they're both men. I know that domestic violence is perpetrated against women because they are physically and emotionally less able to fight back and that the principle damage done to victims of domestic violence and sexual assault are emotional ones that women suffer far more than men... But still, that was shocking for me. I know that a lot of people have fetishes about BDSM and roughness, but honestly my mind always goes straight to concern and fear. I don't mind passion, in fact, I LIKE lots of passion, but restraining another person against their will and then subsequently undressing them is... well, it sounds terrifying. However, I realize that I'm probably in the minority thinking this way and that I'm also possibly blowing a small incident out of proportion. For the sake of my poor little brain, I'm going to choose to view this as a PASSIONATE scene instead. He was just so EXCITED, they both were, that Corbin ended up against the door :)

That being said- that was a very exciting scene! Once again, like in Moonlight and Stained Glass, you got me all excited for manporn and left it at revealed chests and suggested erections. You're such a tease. I am, quite seriously, anxiously awaiting the next AMAZING chapter. I can't wait for them to fall in love and have sweet, wonderful sexy-times.

Thank you! Update soon!

Hi, Blanche!

Oh my gosh, this chapter was really great! It was like electricity was igniting between Ewan and Corbin, very hot! I hope I said that right, LOL. I hope you know what I mean. To tell the truth, the charity event didn't exactly go the way I might have been expecting it too in my mind but was way much better than what I dreamed up.

I love how every time they come in contact with each other it's totally magnetic.

Well, I've been waiting for this chapter. I've been wondering what will happen to them if they meet at the ball! Now Ewan found out about Corbin's corset, when will these two get along together? Waiting for the next one?

Oohh, was that a little bit of jealousy when he saw Ewan with one of the twins?

What an exciting chapter, Blanche! The boys certainly love going insult for insult! lol

Blanche, what a great and entertaining chapter. Oh my gosh, poor Corbin (hmm, no lucky Corbin) being molested in the bathroom by a hunky barbarian in a kilt, LOL. I sense he's a tad bit jealous of Ewan and the Jameson twin. I am hoping maybe Dare will realize something was wrong and there was more to the slap than just the ski trip. I think Dare would be a good confidant with whom Corbin could talk too about his sexuality.

I love this story!

I swear i can see the *"I should hate you" Corbin couldn't reply as Ewan assaulted his lips, hands gripping him in desperation.* And im looking forward to it.