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for Change Your Stars

by xreverie

schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVED the banter between Livvvy and Max! Omg, was that funny! lol

Elena is certainly a bitch. Who is she? lol If her and Damon are "involved" why hasn't Livvy heard of her? He's been there for over a month already, right?

Can't wait for the next update, Joan! :)
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, who's Katherine and what did she say to Damon to piss him off so badly?

Again, I LOVE the banter between Damon and Liv - loved the Pinky and the Brain reference. lolc
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, Joan!

Loved that little Elle is named after Axl Rose! And "Ruh-Roh", was that from "Scooby Doo"? lol

I think Damon's gonna feel like Liv is the easiest person to talk to. I bet he looks forward to their nightly talks just as much, if not more, than Liv does. :)
person sillysue
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Like the story, not too sure about the way you choose to display the story (not sure how to put it). Like the paragraph format better...but good story nonetheless.
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is I love everything about this story so far (although I do wish for longer chapters), and I'm really looking forward to reading more! Liv reminds me of my favorite character from the TV show Supernatural.
person whasup
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still liking what you have written so far, thanks for this story, good one.
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still lovin' the story, Joan!

Liv sure is a feisty guy, huh? I'm surprised Damon can lift him since they are around the same height, right?
person whasup!
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked this first chapter, found it most interesting, nice storyline, good characters, will be looking out for the next chapter.
person Sayure
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going but - just an opinion - I think Damon should be the "mysterious" man here, so talking less from his opinion would be better. Keep the good work.
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning of this. Oliver sure is a wiseass. lol He was alive? Shit, that could go either way. lol That was funny. ;)

It's good the Expensive Suit can banter back and forth with him.

This story is a little similar to another new story on here.

Ok, on to chapter two. :)