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WELL HOWDY DO TO YOU TOO! That was AWESOME!!! I can't wait to read what happens next! I'm wondering when or if Jr will show his mug or that crazy chick that had the screaming match with Damon and Liv.... THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! Read ya laters!

I love your story so much! I'm glad the latest chapter didn't have anything bad happen, the ending statement from the chapter before it left me feeling pretty anxious about what could happen next. But I love the progress of Liv's and D's relationship!

Great story the last chapter was amazing livvy is opening more to Buchanan and that's great I love when that happens eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Thumbs up for bringing back the chemistry :-) The sequence with Oliver's little flashback was worse than I expected. Oral rape is rape, there is no gradation for sexual violation, and Liv really does behave like damaged goods, the poor chap. It's really good for him that he is now more open to Damon's warmth/protection/insight. I wonder if Braveheart plans some sort of revenge...
The only thing that bothered me just a bit is the fact that Liv finds it necessary to keep stressing the issue that he is bisexual and not gay. As if just being gay would be that much worse. It seems like a big deal to him anyway, which makes me wonder if his PTS has anything to do with it and he still aches over his love for Junior, or maybe he's not out, fearing the reaction of his catholic family, and since he doesn't feel aversion toward women he hopes he'll someday fall in love with one. (again) I know the summary for the story featured a 'bi' warning but I assumed it was for Damon and his (ex-)lovers, so I'll admit maybe it's just me who's being weird about it, because whenever I read a good romantic M/M story here, featuring two masculine adults, coincidentally they're always BOTH bisexual. Anyway, all I want to say is this; if you plan on bringing in a (another) female character to attempt to spoil their romance, please send them after Damon like the other ones. Liv's messed up enough as it is so I hope you'll let him deal with his issues and fall in love with Damon. I really look forward to Liv's visit to the office. I bet it'll be hilarious.

Just got done reading it to now and it's quite different then what I normally would read and I have to say I LIKE IT! I wasn't so sure at first but it's grown on me. I can't wait to read what happens next! read ya laters!

I need more! Such a good chapter! I feel so bad for Liv and what he had to go through. I'm so glad Damon can be there for him. They make a perfect pair. Can't wait to read what happens next! Please update soon! ♡
PS- I'm totally excited for any steamy action to come! Their chemistry is lovely. Augh!

Liking this latest paragraphing much better, still an excellent story.

Holy shit was he going to die with someone’s bone in his mouth? Fuck, that was one helluva story to tell at the pearly gates.
‘Son, how did you get here?’
‘Weeelll, you see what had happened was… I pretty much choked on a dick and died. Should I just walk my sinner ass to hell or do you guys have some sort of shuttle service or something?

So that was one of my laugh-out-loud moments in this chapter. The chapter had plenty of them though!

Loved how you wrote Damon's Scottish brogue! :) Braveheart! hehe

Great chapter - very emotional and I really enjoyed their bonding. And now even more bonding - in bed! lol :)

I thought the banter and sneery comments in the first three chapters were absolutely hilarious and the tension buildup was really promising. Though I really like your characters and it looks like there are layers and layers of plot yet to be revealed I am starting to wonder whether anything will ever happen between Oliver and Damon, because apart from the secret glances when the other is not looking, the circumstances seem to lead more and more away from the initial chemistry they had. Apparently Damon still manages to keep a poker face and surely Liv won't be throwing any hints and risk his new job, home, friendship and apparently fatherhood (or at least nannyhood) as it is fairly obvious that Damon is a straight man. At the risk of coming off as a smut-hungry tosser; I do hope you still plan on having them get it on at some point. So will Damon's mask crumble at some point or will he just walk in on Oliver wanking to gay porn, that's sort of how I imagine it would go at this point. Though they'll have to do it quietly with the kid in the house. I suppose Damon would be top, right?

Love it! New fan here. What a cute story so far. Your characters are so endearing and full of personality. I love how pieces of them are revealed so easily; Damon's daughter, Liv's Italian background, and Max's girlfriend. It's well done. It may be a flaw of mine, but if a story is as nice as this I don't really care too much about the grammar/spelling mistakes so I can't exactly give constrictive criticism there. I can say that I love where this is going and am so excited to read more! Liv & Damon make a really cute (and I'm imagining hot) pair. Please update as soon as you feel up to it! So excited for more! ♡