rate_review Reviews

Great story! I totally had a longer more in depth review but my comp took a trip to tardville and now I don't have the time nor the patience to write it over again. To sum it up, loved the characters personalities and I truly hope to see more!

this was so ffing good! i wish there were more fics with competetive martial arts in them, Loved both of the characters and the sex ofc. wat i do think could have been done better is to include a brief intro to mma andbwhat it is. unlike me, they mightnt know what it is and be a litt'e confused by it all. otherwise, a lovely fic that i will def. read again. i want more fics with sweaty muscly men rolling around on the floor together in the name of sport

That was actually really good. I'm a big fan of a lot of things, but I like stories that involve straight characters who happen to find a person of the same sex that they're attracted to~ Don't find to many stories like that, honestly, and when you do they're often really (sometimes understandably) angst-filled.

Which is why I like the ending on this one. Callum has a tiny amount of angst, but they're both willing to just go with it, and I love that.

Aside from that, I just think the story is pretty well written, and if you're planning on writing more originals, I'll be looking out for them. c:

I liked it a lot, very sexy, please write more about Men and sport. Very Good.