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Happy New Year, Laevi! :)

I love your new story!

Finlay sounds so lost. I'm looking forward to reading more about him. :)

Looking forward to more^^

Thanks for another double update! I have to make this short because we are getting slammed with our first Nor'easter of 2014 and have Blizzard conditions in New England and I've been out shoveling to try and keep up with it before I have to go to bed and it's freaking cold outside too and the wind is blowing like a maniac so the snow (which is thankfully light and not that heavy wet stuff I hate to shovel) blows around in my face and blinds me! I have to go make myself a cup of hot chocolate before I go out one last time. I really love this new story!

Omg, Atwood is a retired assassin! lol

He is very sweet to Finlay though, so I'll give him that. :)

Oh, I wanted to point out something: you use the word 'save' when it should be 'safe'.

Ok, on to chapter three. :)

Oh I'm digging the story so far.
Although if I were in Fin's shoes I'd be more wary of Atwood, but then again I'm a cynical kind of lady. lol
If someone's sweet to me like that, I'm so cautious, I'm all like, "You ain't gonna get shit from me, home slice."
But in a way I really do like how sweet Atwood is.
I can just be a bitter bastard sometimes. I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Finlay's father is an ass. He should be shot. But Finlay's mother and sister putting up with him, after they found out what he did to Finlay? That's ridiculous. No one is going to tell me that I can never see my son again. Why on earth does his mom put up with that shit?

Great few chapters, Laevi! :)

You're posting again YAY ! =)
Story is great so far! Atwood seems like an interesting character.

Happy New Years Laevi! I hope you are doing well. I am happy to see a new story from you. I can't wait to read it.

Laevi! Your back! Happy New Year! I've really missed you and have been worried about you. I am already in love with Finlay and Atwood, go figure, that's what you men do to me, LOL. I am curious to meet the third gentlemen. We are getting a huge snowstorm coming to our area starting tonight and it's suppose to end sometime Friday morning so I need to reserve my energy for shoveling by reading your story. Welcome back!!!! ~~~ Huggles ~~~

oh i do hope there will be more to this story i'm loving it this far. Keep going with it.