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for The Stray

by Laevi

schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I didn't think it was Atwood b/c didn't he promise Finlay he wouldn't hurt his father?

I'm sure being the asshole he was, that Finlay's father made tons of enemies. It was probably one of them.
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, delicious, I sense love is in the air and very soon between Steffan and Muller! I am a book nerd and love Sherlock Holmes mysteries. If Nick did do it, all the glory to him for ridding their family of a cruel monster!
person kylee
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Atwood is a smart devil. I feel that Nick did it too but I also agree that Dafydd did deserve to be killed in revenge for abusing Anwen. Delightful story as usual. I had a good laugh when Finlay, Atwood and Muller ended up in bed together. I have a few stories of yours to catch up with. Work has been busy.
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. Unless Atwood hired someone, how would he have killed Finlay's father?

But Nick is right; he's a bastard and whoever did it should get a medal. :)
person Nbsiren
schedule January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good chapter =^.^=
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who killed Finlay's father and think he probably pissed off the wrong person and they took matters into their own hands. Oh my gosh, I almost went blind by all the sizzling hot sex that was going on in this latest chapter and my eyesight is bad enough, LOL. I look like Mr. Magoo with the thick lenses on my glasses and can't wear contacts either. Oh, we had an episode in our basement with the oil burner and our basement almost got flooded, very scary and annoying.
person RJaneyP
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Laevi, I haven't read one of your stories for a while, but kiddo you still write good, main character are always interesting, Charming and sexy! I need to catch-up on your other stories. The Stray is very good I can wait to read more. G
person Nbsiren
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hot^^
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that warmed me to the bones after shoveling all that snow! Very hot! I love these guys and you too!
schedule January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Omg, my computer just combusted from all that heat in the chapter! I hope you're happy, Laevi! lol ;)

I see a threeway relationship in their future, Laevi! lol

Excellent chapter, Laevi! =)