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What! What! What?

Low rating, not because of subject matter but because writing was absolutely horrific. Point of views changed mid sentence, tenses changed every other word. I would expect this from someone who either a) severely too young to be on this site or b) you're an ESL student and this was your first writing assignment EVER! I'm not trying to be mean, but please please please try reading some books written in English. The more you read, hopefully the better you'll get at writing.