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November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and read the 5 chapters back to back! Soooo interesting! :D
Please update it sooooonnnn I can't wait to read more! ^_^
My guesses: He is trying to get pregnant to bring back her (wherever she is!!!) and I don't know how it works?!!! O.o and the dragon is who that going to do it for him! I just can't wait for the 2 of them to get together! :D
Ohhh well the cat and the dog thing is sooo exciting too! Can these 2 get together too?!!! Pleaseeeeee (puppy eyes)
Please update it sooooonnnn I can't wait to read more! ^_^
My guesses: He is trying to get pregnant to bring back her (wherever she is!!!) and I don't know how it works?!!! O.o and the dragon is who that going to do it for him! I just can't wait for the 2 of them to get together! :D
Ohhh well the cat and the dog thing is sooo exciting too! Can these 2 get together too?!!! Pleaseeeeee (puppy eyes)
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October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm Loving Your Story, I'm looking forward to more. Please Update Soon!!!
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May 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and i can't wait to know what's going to happen to Aya now ;) please update soon !
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January 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! keep up the good work and update quickly!
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! You left it on such a cliffhanger please update quickly!!
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi! If you still don't have one I could be your beta :)
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next chapter^^
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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If you like polygamist stories you should read Mix'n'Match by Succulent Ambush (google it) it's a great story, also loosely based on "Nothing to lose".
I like your story even though I think Aya is a little too emotional. Also I recommend getting a Beta reader to help edit out all of your spelling errors and any awkwardly worded sentences.
I like your story even though I think Aya is a little too emotional. Also I recommend getting a Beta reader to help edit out all of your spelling errors and any awkwardly worded sentences.
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December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more^^
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You should read mix 'n' match by succulentambush either at her site (just google it) or fictionpress (update is super sow though). You'd definitely lourve it if you like polygamy