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November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had ideas for you but nothing really came to my mind except for one;Egyptian features,caramel color skin,sensual,black color hair straight with fringe,well toned body kinda like the women in "The Mummy".
As for the chapter,poor Dante,I think he is feeling a little overwhelmed by Julian.Lets see how will he command and instruct his doll so the situation doesn't become overbearing for him.
As for the chapter,poor Dante,I think he is feeling a little overwhelmed by Julian.Lets see how will he command and instruct his doll so the situation doesn't become overbearing for him.
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love love love the story so far :) can't wait for more updates
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I wasn't sure about reading this but am pleasantly surprised and want more! It's a very interesting plot and I can't wait for Virgil and Dante hot smut.
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I sense there is more to Dante and Virgil, the emotional tension is exciting...cannot wait to read more. Great story, very interesting storyline and characters.
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:) Well, I'm interested in reading more!
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
With each chapter the story keeps getting better. I was hesitant but glad now that I read it. Reading Virgil struggle was quite entertaining,looking forward to more:)
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent characterization/narration;you really know how to paint a picture! M/M isn't my cup of tea but by the second chapter I actively wanted these two to get it on. =p I didn't see a thread for this in Promote a Story; you should start one.