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July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why their high school kiss surprises me. Well, I guess it doesn't, Verge is pretty decent at that whole denial thing. XD I like that Dante is going to woo Virgil by taking him on a date to Cheesy King. Also, I sent you an email. :)
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you updated the story. I have always like the premise, but like Dante, I didn't expect the "love" thing. The research bit was amusing and at the same time so like Virgil.
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Probably won't happen but...I think it'd be awesome if Virgil grew curious about bottoming/being submissive and started experimenting with Angelus. Then Dante walks in, catches him, fucks him and Virgil is pleasantly surprised by how much he enjoys it. Just a suggestion lol
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and can't wait to see what's going to happen between the two of them since virgil confessed his love and this is essentially his first real relationship ;)
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! I thought I was going to be an old lady before another update happen. Glad I'm not lol now I will sit here quietly for the next update to happen.
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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First Of Fucking All I NEED to say that: "BETHANY IS A FUCKING FEM-COCK-BLOCKEERRR!!!" Woh! I finally able to let that out.
Sorryy, OMG, but seriously that was SOOOO Amazing. It got me Hot and very Bothered(IN A VERY GOOD WAY, Of course). You're writing skills are really GREAT plus the steamy scenes are surely, surely, surely... Drool Worthy.
Though, I kinda feel that it was a little fast-paced, but don't worry, it still works. I also want to say that I LOVE the new Julian. Virgil really did program him very well... Oh! At the end I don't know what hit me, but I laughed. Dunno why? I'm very excited to what will happen next and I hope for more EROTIC SCENES between our dear lovely couple.
Thank You for the time you spent on updating this story, I hope you'd be able to update this regularly, but no worries, You can take all the time you need for this will be another Magnificent Stories I will be reading.
Sorryy, OMG, but seriously that was SOOOO Amazing. It got me Hot and very Bothered(IN A VERY GOOD WAY, Of course). You're writing skills are really GREAT plus the steamy scenes are surely, surely, surely... Drool Worthy.
Though, I kinda feel that it was a little fast-paced, but don't worry, it still works. I also want to say that I LOVE the new Julian. Virgil really did program him very well... Oh! At the end I don't know what hit me, but I laughed. Dunno why? I'm very excited to what will happen next and I hope for more EROTIC SCENES between our dear lovely couple.
Thank You for the time you spent on updating this story, I hope you'd be able to update this regularly, but no worries, You can take all the time you need for this will be another Magnificent Stories I will be reading.
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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!
That's what I wanted to say when I realized that you updated right the next day I read chapter ten(Which is today, in our country). I was so thrilled that when I hoped You will update Last night, you really did updated. It was truly Amazing, like Magic. Hehe.
Okay, So Going back to the review of the chapter:
Oooohhh, that was kinda dark at the end, BUT Fuck(Does that ring bell?), You SURELY DID delivered a very steamy burning LavaHot Hawt HetHet Erotic Scene. I was squirming so HARD in my seat that my parent asked me what's stuck up in my ASS. And guess what happened next. I laughed so HARD that my parent thought I was crazy, but seriously, I was at the part where they're doing it, and you're going to ask me that? I will surely DIE of Cracked up Happiness. :D
Hahaha, Sorry I ramble too much.
Another thing is, wow, Virgil you're a Kinky FatherFucker. That was a first for me to read that kind of Kink, and now I'm sure hell excited for more of those Wicked Kinks, but Of Course, NOT only the Erotic scenes I will be BEGGING ON MY KNEES for, But also the for the next occurrence that will happen next to the story.
Thank You For the time you will be spending on reading this LameAss Review, and Thank you for the time you spend on writing this masterpiece. As Usual, Take all the time you need, CUZ DIZ IZ AY AWEMAZING Stowryyyy. ;3
That's what I wanted to say when I realized that you updated right the next day I read chapter ten(Which is today, in our country). I was so thrilled that when I hoped You will update Last night, you really did updated. It was truly Amazing, like Magic. Hehe.
Okay, So Going back to the review of the chapter:
Oooohhh, that was kinda dark at the end, BUT Fuck(Does that ring bell?), You SURELY DID delivered a very steamy burning LavaHot Hawt HetHet Erotic Scene. I was squirming so HARD in my seat that my parent asked me what's stuck up in my ASS. And guess what happened next. I laughed so HARD that my parent thought I was crazy, but seriously, I was at the part where they're doing it, and you're going to ask me that? I will surely DIE of Cracked up Happiness. :D
Hahaha, Sorry I ramble too much.
Another thing is, wow, Virgil you're a Kinky FatherFucker. That was a first for me to read that kind of Kink, and now I'm sure hell excited for more of those Wicked Kinks, but Of Course, NOT only the Erotic scenes I will be BEGGING ON MY KNEES for, But also the for the next occurrence that will happen next to the story.
Thank You For the time you will be spending on reading this LameAss Review, and Thank you for the time you spend on writing this masterpiece. As Usual, Take all the time you need, CUZ DIZ IZ AY AWEMAZING Stowryyyy. ;3
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July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG hope Dante knows what he is getting himself into !!!!!! looks like fun, hope to see you soon with another update !!!!!! I'm so hooked !
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July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay another update!!!! You have no idea how happy you made me and that sex scene was really hot. Thank god Virgil and Dante has made some progress.
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July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OmGeeee, Thank YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
Wow! The chapter was very Amazing!!(As Usual)
You Sure did leave a very big Cliffhanger and right now I'm bitting my lips so hard to not scream in crazy gleeeeee.
Gosh I could only hope that you will update as fast as you can, but of course, you should take you time. :3
Thank You.
Wow! The chapter was very Amazing!!(As Usual)
You Sure did leave a very big Cliffhanger and right now I'm bitting my lips so hard to not scream in crazy gleeeeee.
Gosh I could only hope that you will update as fast as you can, but of course, you should take you time. :3
Thank You.