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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was probably the best chapter ever. What's going to happen next?
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September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this ! Something isn't right with miriam, she can't be a simple doll and even if she's old, i don't think that explains the way she's behaving. I mean she's trying to kill him. i hope that virgil will realise how off she is and that he'll save him from drowning. Can't wait to read next chapter ;)
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, My. I was busy for two weeks and haven't had a time to check out the story, but, I was surprised, I already missed 3 updates, so, that was too bad for me. :( Oh, well. Still I'm glad I was able to find time to read it. :D Sorry for the nonsense babbling. Okay, going back to the review of the story...
For me, all three chapter are BARREL-LAUGHS! Seriously.
The part where Virgil kept changing Silas name, the one where Dante and Miriam compete for Virgil attention, and especially the whole chapter of chapter 14. Gosh! It was very Hilarious and it really did encouraged me to do some of the things I'm really bored to do, so I thank you for that. :3
I'm really intrigued to how the story was progressing right now. Miriam sure is very Mysterious Doll. Silas actually seems to be a good guy. The brothers truly are a fun character to add in the story, I'm actually hoping for a Incest(Cross-finger, though). Dante is still our dear Dante, and I never thought I'd lived to say this in front of Vigil, without dying first,of course, but Hell, HE WAS ADORABLE.
Hahaha! Got to wonder why did that thought crossed my mind. :)
As usual, Your writing skills lift my spirits up to the SKIES, and Thank You for updating regularly. I hope that their dinner would be a very fun scene, but whatever the outcome will be, I know it will be Mindblowing. :D
For me, all three chapter are BARREL-LAUGHS! Seriously.
The part where Virgil kept changing Silas name, the one where Dante and Miriam compete for Virgil attention, and especially the whole chapter of chapter 14. Gosh! It was very Hilarious and it really did encouraged me to do some of the things I'm really bored to do, so I thank you for that. :3
I'm really intrigued to how the story was progressing right now. Miriam sure is very Mysterious Doll. Silas actually seems to be a good guy. The brothers truly are a fun character to add in the story, I'm actually hoping for a Incest(Cross-finger, though). Dante is still our dear Dante, and I never thought I'd lived to say this in front of Vigil, without dying first,of course, but Hell, HE WAS ADORABLE.
Hahaha! Got to wonder why did that thought crossed my mind. :)
As usual, Your writing skills lift my spirits up to the SKIES, and Thank You for updating regularly. I hope that their dinner would be a very fun scene, but whatever the outcome will be, I know it will be Mindblowing. :D
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop smiling this whole entire chapter :D. And yay Silas gets twins!!! F**k Yeah!
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really feel bad for Silas, he is in for a double wamie here with the 2 brothers......can I say that Virgel is scary when he is pissed.. BTW thank you for the update...I laughed so much with the 3 of them .....see you soon !!!!!
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August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Miriam and Dante duking it out for Virgil's affection, Love it!!! Though I did pity her in the end. I'm really looking forward to finding out Miriam story, cause she is quite different and truly seems to love Virgil. I also really love Silas! I can't exactly explain why since he hasn't been on a lot, but just the fact that he worries for Dante because of a bad ex-boyfriend and is willing to meet the current guy even after what happened, just makes me love him. I would love too see more of his and Dante's friendship!
BTW, never apologize for a long chapter!! Most readers love them, especially after waiting for an update :)
BTW, never apologize for a long chapter!! Most readers love them, especially after waiting for an update :)
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August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Miriam is not a problem for them, she's scary ok!!!! she could kill Hale in a matter of minuets !!!!! Thank you for the update loved it...hope to see you soon again !!!!!! BTW Virgel is really a little bit off !
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August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH so nervous for what Miriam might do?! She has so much access to Virgil's things and physical strength *bites nails* Can't wait for more!
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July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just started following your story and I must say I'm hooked! I love built up sexual tension and I adore the fun/flirty Dante mixed with the stoic/firm Virgil!
I'm hoping you continue with the flashback sequence because I found them especially interesting and layered. I'm curious about certain experience Dante has/ hasn't had--- since he was wealthy, or at least from a wealthy family growing up. For example, did he not travel with his family when he was younger? I'm hoping some of those details come out in the flashbacks!
I'm so so excited to see more, and I can't wait for their sexual relationship to develop =) =)
On the edge of my seat!
XoXo
I'm hoping you continue with the flashback sequence because I found them especially interesting and layered. I'm curious about certain experience Dante has/ hasn't had--- since he was wealthy, or at least from a wealthy family growing up. For example, did he not travel with his family when he was younger? I'm hoping some of those details come out in the flashbacks!
I'm so so excited to see more, and I can't wait for their sexual relationship to develop =) =)
On the edge of my seat!
XoXo
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July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm loving this !!!!!!!!!! finally their are together, hope all goes well........see you soon :):)