rate_review Reviews

Please update.do'nt abandon it.

Omg this is a wonderful story. I hope you have time to update soon, thanks

So excited to find out more. Thanks for the update! Hope the next one is out soon :)

Love the story! Can't wait to see what happens next! :) Only thing is for some reason the story is not mobile friendly :( I can't get the story to work with my phone. Other stories adjust fine but idk if it's the way the story is formatted but I just wanted to let you know. again love the story and it would be great if I could read it on my phone at least when I'm too lazy to turn on the laptop lol

Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh wow, creepy!

Woah. Just found this story and and am amazed. Superb writing!! Hope you do get a chance to update soon

I really love this story. When are you going to do an update???

Hello, I just wanted to write and say how much I enjoy this story. It's such a subtle, strange world where all these characters live, and there's so many intriguing ambiguities. And the dynamic between Virgil and Dante is great. I love Virgil as a character. He's so analytic and insightful of everything and everyone, except for his own emotions and motivations, which just ruins his judgement in the most dangerous ways (case in point what's happening with Miriam). Dante is vain, stubborn and naive, and yet completely devoted to those he loves. Tons of issues between the two of them, but it makes for excellent power dynamics (which I hope come into play more later on...) And all the craziness with the sex dolls, and kind of unnerving personalities who seem to control those corporations...And then there's references to damaging, abusive religious sects, and who knows what Virgil actually does for a living...The tone is just really good. Anyways, hope you continue to enjoy writing this, and really hoping to see some more in the future :)

oh shit miriam did something to Dante !!!!!! update soon ok !!!!!!