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I really love this! Though she is becoming a bit frustrating. I know she's an intelligent woman but she sure seems to disregard her own life/safety a little too easily! Even for curiosity's sake (it killed the cat, after all!). It would be nice to see a little more reluctance, or at least self-admonishing for overly hasty choices! Especially if his master is a whoollleee lot worse than Liam. Can't wait for your next chapter :) I'm really really curious to see where you take this! And it does seem like Liam is growing attached to her, as much as an incubus can to a human! Which I love.

This is a great story.

I'd like to see Liam take both Emily and Curtis into an open triangle or have some other fun and games.

I have to say that this is truly one of the best incubus stories I've ever read. I love how you keep Liam's character along the straight and narrow, as straight and narrow as an Incubus' path can be. I'm also really enjoying how the trust is there, but Liam frequently reminds her that he isn't someone to be trusted. It's perhaps the most true to Incubi that I've read.

I also enjoy your writing style. It's very natural and quite realistic. One suggestion is that you perhaps add a bit more to Emily. I don't know what you have planned or how deep you've thought about Emily's character, but so far, you've fleshed her out only so much. I understand that she's a somewhat headstrong girl who lives on her own. She occasionally goes out, and one of the best scenes that I think you should've drawn out was the date between her and Curtis. Can you flesh her out a bit more as a character?

Otherwise, I thoroughly enjoy this. All the supernatural sex is great. Keep writing and know that you've got a frequent reader :)

That is one confusing dude

I love this! I don't know but I really hope Liam would fall for Emily. And what's gonna happen to Curtis? Can't wait to find that out on the next chapter! :)

love story. wish i had my own liam. thank you for the update!

Loving this so much. Wow. I don't mind the interspacing information chapters at all. The dialogue is actually quite welcome. But the other parts just WOW.

Please continue to update. I'm growing attached to the characters :)

I really like this story!

It's so awesome! I really can't wait to read more this!

Thanks alot for this story!

Another great chapter! I'm totally intrigued

As a reader I prefer stories with lots of dialogue. To me, it means there's interaction and I think a reader learns more about a character based on how they interact with other characters. Its far more entertaining to me so please keep the dialogue in the chapters. Interaction makes the reader in me fangirl!!!!!!