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Oh, I liked this chapter very much! I am looking forward to our next meeting with Tyveria! Thanks for throwing a bit more information about the Keepers in there--helped sort of organize them in my mind. I love how you define each of the lands by a certain style of dress/hair and little tidbits that are fascinating that I wouldn't even think to include. Lovely as always!

love the serpentine fire ants bit. Fabulous line, very poetic. Ah, this story is so exciting! Another lovely chapter as always. Sorry for the short review this time--I was up rather early and am quite tired, but happy to read this before I go to bed! Yay!

Quite lovely. I enjoyed the confusion of her eye color--the drowning in blue and burning in red was delightful. I hope you put a history of the keepers in soon--it's fabulously interesting!! I am enjoying this story very much! I love how you have already distinguished personality traits in each of your characters using minute details. Brilliant writing, duckie, and I hope to be reading more!

Interesting, very interesting...will be following this now.

Wow! I really love your descriptions, they rock! Super interested in reading more of this!

Very interesting story, will be looking out for the next update.

Cool story, like the universe it comes in....will be looking out for the next update.