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I am already hooked on this and you've only written one chapter. It's very well written which is an added plus and you nailed the atmosphere of the story. I hope you know what I mean by that. It was very scary knowing someone was watching her and I couldn't warn Lisa to be careful and not let Ryan and Colleen leave her there alone. I am hoping for a happy ending without even knowing what's going to happen next. Please let Ryan get suspicious and start looking for Lisa then save her. I am hoping where he is military that he has lots of resources that could help him find her. Good job! I hope you update regularly.

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Please keep this story going,

Katie.