rate_review Reviews

I have found lately that I have quite the addiction to these type of stories and hope that doesn't mean I am a weird or anything, LOL. I hope you don't get discouraged and stop writing for any reason. Please continue, I want to know who this man is and what he has planned for the teacher.

I like this so hope you write more!

I really like your story!

Oh, well done and thanks for the quick update. Lisa's captor intrigues as much as he outrages me. In spite of what he's done to her, he seems genuinely concerned for her well-being. It will be interesting to learn more about his background and his ultimate intentions for her. But... ouch, not a great way to start a day, huh?

Not a bad start at all. A few things that I could point out but overall, well structured and well written. I'm excited to see where this goes.

Hi!

Thanks for posting another chapter so fast. After I reviewed the first time, I read over the chapter again and realized I forgot to mention that I hope the man who took her isn't related to Ryan because of the mention of her kidnapper also having steel blue eyes just like Ryan! Oh, he left her mangled bike so hopefully someone finds it when they realize she's missing and that she just didn't take off for parts unknown and that something bad happened. I am still hoping in the end Ryan saves her and she finds love and a family with Coleen and Ryan.

Anyhoo, this guy gives me the creeps and he is some sort of outdoorsman/hunter/mountain man type guy. I think. I am really worried for Lisa and don't think things bode well for her at least for awhile until help comes in the form of Ryan, I hope!
But, alas I know she has to go through some bad things until then.

Did you check out the forum and ask one of the moderators a question about enabling anonymous reviews? They are very helpful so you might want to check the forum out and see the different topics and such.

Thanks for the quick update and anxious for chapter 3.

Read you later,

Katie.

Holy crap! I love this! I kind of know he's probably going to rape her soon and believe me would never condone something like that BUT am looking forward to reading it. I hope you continue with the fast updates.

Awesome story and welcome to AFF! I love abduction stories as long as they have happy endings.

I hope he trains her with a variety of different toys and uses chains/straps/cuffs, etc. I would love to see him punish her for fighting him. I am addicted to this and only have read two chapters so that should tell you something.....

Great start! I will admit I usually read mostly slash stories here on AFF but recently have started to read Het similar to your story. I am very nervous for Lisa and who her abductor is, and why did he target her out specifically.