rate_review Reviews

WOW so far SOOOO GREAT! read ya laters!

This is a promising start. I tend to read only completed stories and I see that this could go really long as you explore their adventures before the end of this. I did see some typos but they are not worth worrying over in my opinion. There is still a lot to do in fleshing out the characters, of course, and setting the backstory but you are just starting. The characters are already interesting and I am looking forward to the morning to see what happens. Sian is an interesting question right now; I am interested to see how he fits in your plans.
I really hope you take these characters to their resolution, whatever it is that you bring them to.