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You should update...this would be a really good story to continue!

A fun little interlude on a spree of reading sex. Light, upbeat, well-written and humorous. Thanks!

This is a pretty neat little story! The characters' personalities seem to be as well illustrated and defined as they need to be for a one-shot, and the dialogue feels natural. I was interested in the story the whole way through. You did a great job of putting in little atmospheric details like the doctor's pen and the boy spitting.