rate_review Reviews

Beautifully written. :)

Woah. This is off to a spectacular start. I'm really intrigued by the story so far and your writing has a lovely flow. There are a few typos here and there, but very nice overall. I'm excited for the next chapters to come!

Already in trouble?!

This story, while punctual and concise, is sooo cliche. It's not that it's not interesting, it's just that there's too much over-explanation, everyone seems to need to monologue their feelings, and the whole "so-and-so's beast" thing just sounds like another metaphor for penis.

So far I really like your story an am eagerly waiting for an update.

This story seems really interesting! I'm not sure if this story has "mates" in any context (through choice or instinct) but whomever Giselle was with before is a powerful asshole! UGH! But I like the various characters and I'm curious how Beaux is going to play into this in the future. His blood is delicious (maybe just because it was compared to the unsavory lot's but...) and that could mean she's connected to him the same way that Ethan(?) is connected to her. Not sure if I'm feeling love triangle (I always feel saddened by those) but that's just me getting ahead of myself a bit...(and talking about something that's not really my concern is it??)

I also appreciate the fact that she's Indian. It was more refreshing than I thought to have a character that wasn't "as pale as newly fallen snow" or something like that. I'm looking forward to more of this story! Thanks so much!

~hitachiintwinlover