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November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing, a totally new take. I also love how Richard is such an well made unique character, not the kinds you see often. I am really liking this a lot, I look forward to your story and know that you have my support, great job!
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
haha
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY! What's a rabbit to do??? Ooops I mean lion, bear, oh MY! Well I guess we'll just have to read to find out! read ya laters!
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want you to know I've scrolled past this story about 500 times and every time I think to myself "Is it fucking werewolves like, 'I'm going to fuck these werewolves'? or 'Damn these fucking werewolves!'"
I'm really too lazy to read summaries so I'm actually going to sit here and read the whole story to figure it out. LOL
I'm really too lazy to read summaries so I'm actually going to sit here and read the whole story to figure it out. LOL
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just read some of your reviews and all I can say to most of them is if you don't like it WRITE ONE YOURSELF! I know it's hard to write these storys and I don't care if it's long or short because I know you could write by hand 3-4 pages and when it's typed it may only make half a page. Also everyone see's themselves as what ever they want I think Richards discription is great! Sorry it doens't conform to what you think but I like it because it makes him more real if not human WHO doesn't think they come off as one thing and others think YEAH right that's SO NOT you. So before you BECOME HARPIES back off and read and enjoy and THINK before you WHINE and BITCH about A STORY YOU ARE NOT WRITING!!! To the author I'm sorry for any problems this may or may not cause. Please just do the best that you are already doing! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR STORY!
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November 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First I wanna say that I am enjoying reading this story. I happen to be a fan of werewolf stories. Anywhoots, now that you know I like it I have a few comments that I hope you don't take wrong because I want to see more of the story! ^_^ Well here goes. Reading the other reviews there is a pretty common comment of short chapters. Its so aggravating when I get into a story only to come to the end of a chapter (of course that goes with long or short chapters alike!) so longer chapters are always a plus. I love, love, love, Richards attitude! He is awesomely hilarious. How he acts and how he was described clash. He acts a lot different then you would expect with how he was portrayed. That's pretty much it, however, Brent's a big guy right? He's like 6'7" and very muscular yet he is wearing skinny jeans and a tight neon shirt.....kinda creeps me out. LOL! Seriously though, nice story and I think you got something here. A few tweaks and It'll be good. I really want to see more!
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I TOTALLY LOVE IT! Great start so keep going if you can if you get writers block give a shout! I can't wait to see if A happens to be one of those people groping R during the party? OR will A steal P and Piss R off? OH and is Brent in the closet???? I mean the emo kid creeping him out? YEAH YEAH I know I'll just have to read to check it out. read ya laters!
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yay
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Plz! Update!!! I loved the story and I wish the chapters were longer!!! Ahhhh, it left off an a great cliff-hanger!!!! Please update!!!!!