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for My Sweet Wolf (On Hiatus)

by MissChaotic

person Sephla
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to seeing this story again. I'm not a writer, only a reader, so I have no idea what shape the story should take. However, something along the line of mates would be nice. Or perhaps his family comes from a family of hunters and he is destined to be mates with a werewolf!! Oh My!! LOL! I'm sure someone will have a better idea mine but I try. HaHa! Anywhoots again hope to see it back up soon!
person Lapha
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good story. The main character is an asshole but I want to see how Wolf will 'attack' and 'eat' him.
For the translations :
Les garçons, devons nous le répéter tous les jours ? - Boys do we have to do this every day?
Grand frère grand frère j'ai quelque chose à te montrer ! - Big brother big brother I have something to show you!
C'est bon Lottie. Qu'est-ce que tu veux me montrer ? - It’s okay Lottie. What did you want to show me?
=> use "tu" for singular and "vous" for plural or respectful singular (use between siblings only if there are nobles).
person Sephla
schedule November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! As per the usual, going great and loving it. I swear I have a cousin that acts just like Richard. LOL! He cracks me up. I think he is officially one of my favorite characters ever on any story I've read. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. The more I see of Aiden the more I'm liking him as well. Can't wait to see more!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update !
person Twinkletoes
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will be waiting for the next update, this story just gets me more drawn in each time I read a chapter, great story!!
person wolfluv
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME!
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
😘 love it I can't wait to see wat will happen next, keep up the good work.
person Danil
schedule November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is going great. Loving it so far, will be waiting for the next chapter, good writing, wonderful characters, exciting setting and storyline..what's not to love eh....
schedule November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was really good, can't wait until next chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Super story, can't wait for the next update. For a first story, you are doing fabulous, and I am a fan of mpreg, looking forward to that...