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I liked the old story as well but as you said his personality Was really kinda hard to love but from the new personality from the proliferation I really like this different side.And can't wait to see you finish this story. Good Luckkkkk

I like how it has started. It seems better.

Um, chapter one is way too short so I hope that future ones will be much longer.

Good story! I don't think I ever read the previous version but like this one so far. I hope Richard and Aiden were born to be each other's mates but who will be the alpha of the duo? I love Mpreg and if they are wolf shifters perhaps that could be worked in somehow to work.

Right, so I waffled about registering for roughly four months. This time after reading your story I HAD to leave a review. I really liked your first attempt at the story. Granted it was rough around the edges. Richard was hilarious, but as time went on became more shallow and well, frankly an ass. Regardless your writing style kept me very entertained, and constantly checking for more. With that said, I think it's great that you strive to make the story better. The thing is I thing Richards humor was great, it would be a good part to save. On the flip side, did you have a specific reason to make the family bilingual? The first time it was french and now it's Spanish.... Is there plot development that uses it? because if not it will probably give you more grief than it's worth. I come from a bilingual family and on most days that fact does not greatly alter my life or choices. Again I have nothing against it. I also found the change that Richard has two dad's interesting. It will be great to see where you take it. It will certainly help Richard keep an open mind. Great job so far.

I like this newer version better. Seems more detailed and I do like Richards personality in this one. I did like the old one but I think this one will be more memorable. Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter. I also like that he has two dads.

It was SO cute. Loved it ;3

So much better!

Big diff in the title. Hope you keep going with the story.

Interesting start so far^^Wonder what the family secret is^^ I have the feeling there is something supernaural(probably werewolfs if you keep the title in mind^^) and some mpreg envolved but thats just a theory^^ I mean a familly where everybody looks as if they are related and they should be adopted just seems strange^^ Well we will see. Thanks for posting this and hope to hear from you again soon!!!