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for Taking it All

by Payton_Leeroy

schedule May 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this update for far too long. Thank you for this. Great chapter. Would love to read more!
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I dont want to be mean I love the story but i cant understand the relationship with girl. Its stupid :/
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "Ouch!" lol

Well, I'll tell you, Peyton, I can't see Perty sitting there like Neil did. Hmmm, wonder if she's into pain? If not, then I can't see how happy Jerit would be with her since he certainly likes to administer the pain.

And I was just waiting for the curtains to be drawn back and the whole school getting a look at what the boys were doing! lol

Glad you're back, Peyton! :)
schedule October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy when I saw that this was updated! Another hot chapter for Jerit and Neil! :)

¡°Good, because I never plan to let you go. You are mine forever.¡±
This story is somewhat a prequel to Whatever it Takes, right? So I really wonder what happened to them that had Neil gone in their lives in the sequel.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Lisa
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter!!!

How generous is Perty?? She bought him a new bike!! And she took them out for my favorite thing: sushi. If Neil had actually dipped the sushi in soy sauce it would taste much better.

I can't believe Jerit carved his initials onto Neil's skin. That's gotta hurt.
schedule May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update! Thank you for this! :)

Wow! I love this chapter! So full of Jerit/Neil moment! I want more! I'm dying for moooore! T_T
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm REALLY dying to read more!!!

I've read this in one go and I really love it! I didn't expect Perty to come into their lives though but this is getting really interesting. Though I am really hurting for Neil. Poor him :'( I also did not expect Jerit to fall inlove with Perty that fast and I wasn't even expecting him to be in another serious relationship in the first place! But I still love this story, I'm a masochist like that. haha. I just hope Jerit won't choose Perty over Neil though. And I can't imagine how hurt he will be once Jerit and Perty starts their own family. He probably should have wish it was a guy Jerit was seeing instead of a girl. Oh my god! I just wish things would not go that far.


Looking forward for the next chapter! :)
I have a bad feeling something bad will happen though. Oh no no..
person bambi4real
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Having read whatever it takes and not having heard of Neil in that story it makes me really nervous now with all this talk about saving other people first. I think the whole story I have been waiting find out if Neil dies or has a major falling out with Jerit hence he is not in their lives in Whatever it takes.
schedule March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, why do I feel that Neil just made a promise to the devil? lol I like how the mafia kingpin and Neil "bonded" over Perty and Jerit's safety. lol

But what the hell was with the other guy? And how did he know what Neil had been up to?

Great chapter, Payton! :)
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Payton, you're back!!!!!!!!!Thank God! Boy, I missed this story! I had to reread the last two chapters to re-familiarize myself with the story!

I'm so glad Neil was able to get out of that dangerous mess with that nasty lady. I just don't like Neil going out and being all mercenary. It would be great as long as there was no chance of him getting hurt. :)

So, Perty is now in a poly relationship. That's what they're called, right? Jeez, it's hard enough for me to find ONE guy! I can't imagine finding TWO to live with! lolol

Great chapter, Payton! Don't disappear for so long next time, huh? ;)