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for Part of the Process

by Sophia_Beau-Chateau

schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was Ari's scumbag poor excuse for a father who planted those explosives.

This was a haunting chapter. Poor Ari, having to deal with all the guilt from his little sister's death. :( No one would have blamed him for getting close to the person (his best friend), who was there to offer him some comfort.
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What's a burner phone?

Will Ari and Zed ever find out who set the explosion? That's what I want to know! lol
person Jade
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm really liking this story and wish the chapters were longer...but if that means not doing them as well or as frequently them no worries-can't wait for the next chap (:
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, Sophia! What happened????? Are people following Ari? Did they set up a bomb in the train?

What a cliffie! lol

I hope you can update soon! :)
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Liking this, off to a nice and interesting start.