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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely cool !
I think Raice is just mislead, maybe addicted to gambling, else he wouldn't have a problem to recognize that he's in love with Matteo - and wouldn't ever have throw all the No. 1 chips into the pot.
But if I were in place of Raice now, I'd rip Damon's nuts off at the next oppurtinity. And a battlefield would provide an exellent opportunity for that...
I think Raice is just mislead, maybe addicted to gambling, else he wouldn't have a problem to recognize that he's in love with Matteo - and wouldn't ever have throw all the No. 1 chips into the pot.
But if I were in place of Raice now, I'd rip Damon's nuts off at the next oppurtinity. And a battlefield would provide an exellent opportunity for that...
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November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It looks like he may be losing control. He uses his chips on his prisoner (good thinking to have them on him at all times) and is to busy trying to break him to notice he lost the flags and then he over hears Finn - he seems to be off his game this chapter... Poor Matteo! Not only is he being held by Damon but then he has to look over and see Gunner with Finn's arms around him. I hope when the month is over that he gets the light back in his eyes.
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November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
okay, random comment, but that line 'Bondage. Do me a favor and go find an imagination.'...actually had me laughing hysterically... anyways, really like this. moral ambiguity, weird fantasy world...very interesting. and quite interested to learn more about cisco. things seem...complicated :)
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November 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this story. Thanks for the quick updates!
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November 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Interesting poker game. you have quite the imagination
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November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Interesting setting, hot sex (okay, some of the sex was not hot, it was like, torture, but I still found it interesting)... though there are some things I don't understand yet. What is Matteo? Was he actually voluntarily selling himself for money, even to those horrible general guys? Or was he pressured into doing something he didn't want to do? And if Rayce is in a relationship with him right now, are the generals leaving him alone? Also, I can't decide if Rayce is just a dom and only pushes his partners because he believes they want it that way, while caring about not hurting them, or if he's got a crazy rapist side just like his brother... Very interesting story though, I like every chapter! And speedy updates, wow, so awesome. Thanks!