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Noo. not Raice!e's brothe rapeped him.





Oh No, not Raice! A nd his only brother? So Cisno is really the slave of Axel ? Gaahhh, kill him !!!!












anger again!

What the hell did AFF with my review? And where is Matteo?
And Raice was raped just because Cisno is Axel's slave?
And these cracy Homo sapiens want poor Sylphos to change into a woman? No way!

Haha, no problem! Hmm. Just a thought...Could Raice‘s children have something to do with Matteo? He seems to know Snow for a longer time...

But the title of chapter ten was fitting in more than one way...*snickers*

Well, I guess now Raice knows the meaning of „pay-back“. At least his guys were nice enough to let him keep his v-card before they turned him into a living porch swing (with toys pre-installed) and all four of them made themselves comfortable on him. ROFL ! The injection was mean, but I guess, Raice somehow deserved it. It was just a bad timing.

And again Matteo saved Raice‘s ass. Without the salt, they wouldn‘t have had a chance against Undine. So, no salt fetish for Sylphos. :-))

But it was a good idea to sacrifice the artefact to free the Naiads. Not only that it was a good thing to do, but Raice will possibly have allies now in Decay and Axel didn‘t get his hands on the Tear of Undine - and the remains of the artefact are now around the neck of Matteo - who will undoubtely put it to good use.

Aaand finally Raice got back his Matteo. *smiling broadly* But I wonder what‘s going to happen now.

I'm sort of in love with this story. I really appreciate the time you take to update and the evolution of all the characters.

Rayce just makes me giggle at his obliviousness to whats going on around him.

This last chapter was just awesome.

So um… when do we get to see Axel getting pounded by Cisco? Can that be his punishment for trying to rape his baby bro? Pretty Please???

I am really loving this story! Can't wait for more!!!

Thank you for the shout-out, but your story‘s really great! So you can count me to your fanclub!
Wow, that was a lot of stuff happening in one single chapter! And Finn? Raice really wants Finn as his last team member? That was quite a surprise. I thought he would wait until Matteo‘s free again or he manages to kill Damon... But then again, Finn could become handy when Raice needs to distract his enemies inside Fade.
Like eg. Axel. Oh, that was a close call for Raice. The ruler would have killed him - a helluva way to die. Thanks Weiser Raice could escape - but the old officer seemingly can‘t keep Axel and his clique in line although he is higher in rank than them. And Cisno - well, Cisno = Axel‘s specimen? Seems he doesn‘t need to get in trouble, cause he is already in deep trouble!
Axel knows his way concerning drugs and I could bet he knows ways to change someone‘s personality by using them. At least this would explain what happened to Cisno. So Cisno might have use the last resort and fetched his unruly stubborn brother. Raice‘s story - hm - he killed that woman, but I wonder who was the one who was raped...
But well, Raice did a really good job with comforting Flaere, Jun and poor Sylphos. And I‘d love to see the baby of Raice and Sylphos. The Gunner temper mixed with Sterling‘s venom. LOL! That kid would make the vamps cry, that‘s for sure!
But for Snow...I‘d recomend a proper spanking until he learns what a scientist is allowed to do and what not, especially if the specimen are his team mates.

Haha, Snow is great! Uses the sexy nurse outfit in the same way like pediatrist use inflated gloves with funny faces paint on them. And he gets more and more samples - even from an outraged Sylphos! (By the way, I can understand Sylphos - what medics did and still do to IS-people is a real dark chapter in the history of medical research, ranging from exploitation, abuse to brutal genital mutiliation)
But I hope Snow will listen to Raice‘s warning and doesn‘t get in trouble. And I wonder what Snow found in Raice‘s sperm...
And Alex - yes! More stomach ulcers for him! Who let the dogs out? LOL, I bet Raice‘s team will do a lot more than that. :-)). But what Alex said in chapter seven that was quite interesting. I‘ve got the impression that he actually loathes Cisco, taking orders from him only because of Cisco‘s a genius in strategy. My guess is that Alex is waiting until Cisco shows a weakness or he makes a mistake. Raice should be better doing an excellent job or his brother might be in big trouble.

I love this story and I was just wondering, can I elope with it? I feel like a wedding ceremony would be far too complicated.

And yes, if nothing else I remembered at least the scene from the Lady and the tramp. LOL.

Poor Trent. At least Raice could make it clear to him now what‘s Finn‘s true nature. Maybe somebody ( Snow?) can provide Trent with regular shots of testosterone, so he can have at least a bit of fun. And somebody should kill this religious fanatics who emasculates babies.

And the the fighting scene! So great when Matteo came to resque Raice! Good thinking of Raice to shoot down the tree to kill the vamp.

Then Snow, haha! He‘s great! Raice thought he‘d got a good fuck for his chip and instead Snow took a sperm sample from him. I wonder what Snow‘s research ist about.

Then ALEX, the notorious pervert general of the forces came in (forced by Cisco) and pushed Raice far up the career ladder. ROFL, I bet Axel is now suffering from stomach ulcers!

once again you amaze me with your skills. i both hate and like the main character, which is so awesome. on one hand he's kind of horrible because he enjoys raping and humiliating other men, on the other hand he has motives/reasons (though not always justified) to be that way, cause if he didn't he'd probably be at the bottom of the food chain. also his narrative is kinda funny sometimes XD Like how he sort of seems to enjoy his spat with Damon, and finding crap under the sofa. it's all very refreshing despite the mean things he does to other people.