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Damn! Just Damn!!! That was insanely twisted, had my stomach twisted, but I couldn't put it down. Looking forward to the next update.

Oh goodness! I felt so bad for poor Lorien and want to kill Jael with my bare hands. I was reading this on this bus and had to be careful not to let the nosy busy body sitting next to me see what I was reading. That would have been rather embarrassing, LOL. I wonder what else the evil prick has in store for the poor prince and think things will only get worse for him before they get better.

I really enjoy your stories. I love them so much because what's happening is not real nor is anyone really being hurt because it's only fiction. I would never condone something like this ever happening in real life. If you need ideas for new stories, please consider this one. I would love to read one about a young man kidnapped by another man and taken home as a companion/pet for his dog/dogs. The owner could put doggy ears, a dildo with a tail attached for him to wear, mitts on his hands to keep him more helpless, a shock collar to wear, be left nude all the time, etc. The victim would have to crawl around on his hands and knees at all times just like a dog (maybe wear knee pads) and be treated like one. The person who kidnaps him would live in the country away from civilization and therefore could even put him outside without the worry of being seen by anyone. I don't know just an idea for a story that has been lurking in the back of my mind but I don't write nor have the talent you do for these type of stories. Anyway, thanks for sharing this new story, I am having fun reading it as well as your other ones.

Thanks for updating the Madness of Cloe! I enjoyed the latest chapter very much.

Oh gosh, poor Lorien! I despise Jael and hope by the end he suffers a horrible death for his cruelty. I hope someone helps Lorien. Maybe, one of Jael's own men will who hates him for what he is doing. I hope Lorien can help his poor mother too.

Thank you for updating this so fast! I am kind of scared to read the chapter with the executioner so might have to peak through my fingers while reading it. How is he going to actually go through with torturing and killing his own people. I hope he doesn't no matter the consequences.

Good night!

Daymn!!! Poor L.

Thank you! You nailed the knotting and unfortunately the Mastiffs nailed Lorien BUT I loved it!!!!! More of them later with Lorien again, pretty please!!!!!!! Oh, and hopefully maybe a War Horse?

Chapter 1. I'm interested in how Lorien will get rid of Jael and restore his kingdom. The plot sounds like it'll be a challenge with all the possible disgrace that Lorien will go through. I'm curious as to how much his tribulations will contribute to Jael's fall.

Oh, if you do have Lorien getting 'raped' by the Mastiffs don't forget the knotting aspect of it. Maybe, other animals later too!

I love it.

Judging from the tags, it looks like being a good boy won't be enough. Poor kid :(