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Hi Rain & Gothguy and I hope you both enjoyed your Halloween evening. Thanks for explaining things. I think Trent is going to regret calling Ben a Fag and wished he was nicer to him. That was pretty cruel of him to do. I think that kid Ben saw was Matt. It's still isn't what I was expecting but I like this anyway. Good job and waiting to meet the third guy in this dark saga.

Sorry, I am totally confused by this story and therefore will not be reading it anymore. It's confusing and misleading. I thought story would be focusing on the friends we met in chapter one with three of them being the victims but such is not the case and now we are reading about another totally different character. I can't follow this story and summary confused me, sorry again. I must have misunderstood what it was about. Good luck.

Happy Halloween!

So, I have to admit this wasn't what I was expecting but I can see where you're going with it. I thought we would be seeing more of Trent, Ben and the gang but it seems this story will focus more on different 'victims' and not from the same group like I originally thought. Is it going to vary chapter to chapter? Interesting. See you next update and have a spooky evening, Katie

I like very much so far. Looking forward forward to abduction.

hi guys
oh my god you are here

such amazing story only one chapter and i know it would be great

i am very excited ... oh i think trent and ben and jarrod would be captured oh i really like to know who their kidnappers are? maybe some pirates or maybe some native american who live in tribe;))))))))

can not wait for next chapter

I love the name of the cruise ship; Dream Weaver and wonder what it stands for in relation to the disappearances happening on board the ship. Anyhoo, what the heck was Randy's mother-in-law thinking booking them on this particular cruise in the first place? She had to know what was going on, didn't she? Maybe, deep down she hates her son-in-law and wants to get rid of him, lol. I too think it will be Trent, Ben and possibly Jarrod who are abducted but not sure. I am thinking they will probably be drugged in some way too. Waiting for Thursday and another new chapter.

Rain, I would love to see pictures of these guys so will you be posting them to your blog soon, or not?

This looks great! Can't wait to see the next installment!

Hi Rain and gothguy, 1st reviewer of your new joint effort! I am so excited about this new story. So, there are five friends taking the cruise but only three will be mysteriously disappearing. I am thinking it will probably be Trent and Ben but who will be the third friend taken? Waiting for Thursday to find out what will happen next! I love dark/angst stories and as long as no one dies I am happy.

I am hooked already on this. I wonder how these guys are being taking off the cruise ships without anyone knowing it. I love a good mystery.