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I wish that Ben was taken too because the way it is now Trent will never forgive him for what he did. Ben should go to jail for turning his friend over to a trafficking ring and become jail bait to nasty perverts. I really wish Ben and Trent had ended up together and thought they both would have ended up as sex slaves together then found love but it's not going to happen. Even if Trent gets out of this he will probably beat the crap out of Ben when he finds out it was because of him this all happened. I hope Ben is happy now the asshole.

Just so you know, you repeated story over right where they cut off Trent's shorts and squeeze his balls. It repeats the same part over so you might want to fix that. I think that Ben should have given Trent a chance since he did have second thoughts but now it's too late and he'll be lucky that Trent won't want to kill him once he finds out it's his fault for what's happening to him.

Hi Rain & Gothguy, Oh the drama is beginning and poor Trent is the first victim! Oh, I thought you would want to know part of chapter is duplicated. I copied and pasted below for you to see.

With a few skilled slices and his gym shorts were gone and his underwear was next. Before long he was naked from the waist down, spread and on display for the two freaks. Trent continued to sob, but he could barely breathe out of his nose because of it so he tried to stop. His eyes darted to each of the men as they leered down at him. Finally Dan knelt down at the end of the bench and gazed longingly at his cock, balls and ass which were a spectacle in the big room. He was humiliated so thoroughly he thought he would die on the spot and soon he would wish he had, especially when Dan’s hand reached up and grabbed his balls and started to squeeze.

After Ben’s big confession Trent had walked back to the lounge and found that his other friends were gone. He ordered a drink but then left it without even tasting it. He wanted a clear head when he talked to Michael. Michael would know what to do about it, but what the hell was there to do? It wasn’t like he was going to leave Jen and turn gay for Ben. He loved Ben like a brother but he could never be with him in that way.

good and nice

i think we know the third one know ... yass

it is going to be amazing

hi dears

oh i am curious now ... i really want to know the third one

damn i knew it they kidnap them and sell them but i really want to know who is going to buy them

poor matty his life is so hard but i have a feeling all of them i mean trent and matty and the third one are going to be more happy with their new life

Good chapter! I am confused by Matthew's (Matty) non action against every one who is using him. Why doesn't he fight back or call for help. Is his uncle selling him? Why are they targeting him? The men have a list that kind of interesting. Well, this is definitely different from your other stories but I am very curious to see what is happening, who is behind it, and why. Keep up the good work! Oh, I am so excited about the new Hunger Games movie; Catching Fire and am going to see it with my friends. I am seeing Thor the Dark World tonight! I love Chris Hemsworth as Thor and bet he would fit with one of your characters.

Oh good Lord, today is Tuesday, I am seeing Thor on Friday evening, LOL.

Rain and Gothguy, I am still here and reading! I feel really bad for Matty and hope his aunt and uncle don't think he jumped over board after he disappears. Why didn't he tell them about those men using him like they did? They seem nice and like they really care for him. What happened to his parents?

ok guys ... don not be in a hurry ... this is only the start of this story only 3 chapter

i am sure everything would be better in next chapters

i know i was a bit disappointed especially about ben ... i thought he was very innocent but no he was not .. ok i know trent was very rude and called him fag but no matter what when you love somebody you do not what hurt him or her .. i think it was lust not love i mean if ben really liked trent he did not want somebody hurt him.... maybe it is better maybe trent find true love

Good morning Rain and Gothguy25, I hope you both had fun on Halloween. I know I did.

I was confused by chapter 2 and the introduction of Matthew which kind of threw me for a loop (is that the right phrase?) because for some stupid reason I believed story was going to be mainly about this group of friends with whom three would be taken somehow from the cruise ship. Then you explained in note that would not be the case.

I know Trent is a royal prick but don't like the way Ben wants him gone. I thought Ben was a nice guy so why turn him into an evil person? He might need to be taught a lesson but not what Ben is talking to Kirby about. Get rid of him?! Ben should go to jail and become jail bait if he proceeds with this course of action.

I got very excited after reading chapter 1 but now will admit not sure how much more I will be reading. I will give it an attempt but am sorry (and hate myself for mentioning this) because it's not what I thought it would be about. You know I love you, right? I know it was going to be dark and was ok with that but not sure about this.

I will await judgement until after I read the next chapter or two.