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I was thinking... wouldn't it be sweet revenge for Trent to hand over Ben to the man who was going to take him and Matty as their new owner.

oh thank you guys both of you have a good holidays

Rain, you and Goth, have a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! See you next year!

oh my god their master is here oh nobody can help them nowwwwwwwwwwwww:(((((((((((((
what abou yass who is his master????????

please update

Trent didn't notice Yass breaking free, was it because he was too busy watching what they were doing to Matty? It looks like they might escape thanks to Yazz and the FBI are coming to the rescue too. I guess things will be coming to an end soon. It's going to be funny seeing Ben's expression when Trent confronts him. I still wished it was Ben who was taken with Trent because it's kind of weird him just falling in love with Matty like that.

oh thanks guys

nice chapter

can not wait to find about yass master

oh god please let Trevor save them
oh no dog what he means with dog please no

Hi.
I really like the premise of your story, it drawn me in when I started reading it, the writing is good, the characters, however, I feel are too unrealistic.
I find the relationship between Matty and Trent to be quite forced, it's nice that you want them to be together, I think it can be a great couple - but Trent quick transformation from who he was to who he became after seeing matty was too fast. I can apriciate him being wrried about Matty, or charmed by his appearance, but I think getting to the point he is willing to sacrifice himself to get the boy to safety came on too fast, you'd expect there'd be some conflict on Trent's part before coming to that decision, even if it came in a situation where thinking clearly is not completly possible.

would love to read more~!
<3

damn damn damn

poor them ;(((((((((((((

please please please let them be together under control of a firm but nice master

yass and trent and matty with a master

Still patiently waiting to find out who is buying them and will they have the same owner. Holy Shit Rain, I think Yass is in for one heck of a surprise when he wakes up, LOL.