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for Dark Cruise

by 2bound4kink

person angela
schedule February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi guys

good job both of you

can not wait for another story
person angela
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh god it was great i love it so much

matty and trent ...carl and yass are very cute
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank gosh that Matty and Yazz are safe now but I wonder if Ben is pooping in his pants or does he think no one will trace what he did back to him?
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Rain and gothguy, want to have a Walking Dead party? I am so go crazy waiting for 9 pm to arrive.

I loved seeing Matty be brave enough to fight back and try to escape so he could get back to Trent. I am worried that Matty's 'owner' will wash ashore and then Trent and Cal will be in trouble or the guy who owns the gun and let them borrow it and his boat might. I hope not though. Oh, who was watching them, that is kind of scarey? Now, I hope Cal can rescue Yazz from the hell his band mates have him in.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What!!!???!!! Yazz!!!!!! Where is Cal his FBI savior ? Cal has to save Yazz from his own band!!! This can't be happening! Oh, the manager should be able to get help for him once he's sees what's happening!
person daqueen
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events. Now, whose saving Matty?
person angela
schedule January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
poor matt :(

please someone help him .. he is so innocent

thanks guys
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! Trent has to save Matty!!!!! Ben is pretty stupid if he doesn't think the police will find him at his home since that is where he's headed so technically he just thinks he's getting away with what he did to Trent.
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Having a WTF moment. Please save MATTY!!!
person angela
schedule January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thanks god you guys are here

thank you both of you .. it was great can not wait for next chapter