rate_review Reviews

Can I just say... your writing is the reason i keep coming back here? It's amazing!! i love love love reading your work. it's very well written and just perfect :D I wasn't sure when i started reading this fic that I'd like it but i'm totally hooked.

Definitely still like this story.
Waiting for updates very impatiently. :p

I absolutely HATE Max! I hope that Jessica somehow gets him back and puts him in his place! This whole 'stockholm Syndrome' angle works well... however, I can't handle seeing weak and whimpering females who are 'besotted' w/ their abuser! I'm awaiting a drastic shift where Jessica has all the power!!!! I like the idea of them together, as twisted as this seems, ONLY if they.... become equals (which means Max will have HELL to pay in order for him and J. to be on equal footing...). Love the detail though! It's dark, definitely.... which I too enjoy.

I like this chapter! There were lots of emotions Jessica is going through. From the moment she woke up, we saw how she was feeling towards Maximilian right now. How her feelings towards her situation is changing. And Maximilian is sweet and harsh at the same time in this chapter. Looking forward for more interactions between them (aside from the sex I mean.haha) :)

Well this just got heavier. She really can't do anything about it at this point. So what if he made up stuff while reading the newspaper? What is she going to do? She's going to be stuck there for a long time unless Max slips up on something and she can escape but come on, it's Max. Ooh pretty please update Euphoria as well. I've been missing that story.

Love it! Update soon!!

Amaze balls~ They're making progress, but they're still at the level of her still messing something up and getting punished for it.

If it would be me writting, i would put a chapter of her past possibly hard with her parents. That would be a great reason for her wanting to travel. I would probably make her decide if freedom was really worth the problems if she would fail, and i would make max put a new test for her. Like he could fake to loose consciousness in the kitchen or something, with for exemple ulrik waiting near the door. She could succeed the test by getting water for him or somethig alike. But again, that would be me XD. Anyway, great story even if i dont like the whole slave thing, it is captivating and wonderfull.

I love this chapter! I don't know but it seems sweet to me even though Jessica seems really vulnerable..

More pls! :)

loving this story, wish the chapters were longer. love getting into the guys head and seeing how deep his psychosis goes.
i'm not sure how i want this story to go. i think right now you could take it in any direction and i'd be fine with the fantasy!

i also hope you update euphoria soon!