rate_review Reviews

I am LOVING this story so far. It's gripped me from the beginning- I haven't done anything over the last day but read!!!
Fab job!
I am really hoping that Jessica doesn't lose her fighting spirit and even though I adore a dark romance I am a romanticist at the end of the day and am hoping for a knight in shining armour (Max had better be!!) and I suppose ultimately for Jess to escape and then CHOOSE to go back to him.
I don't know- maybe that's completewly away from where you're going with the story but that's what I love in a book:
Conflict,
Dark eroticism,
Some sex talk is always a huge turn on,
A hero,
A villain
And some love- no matter how messes up or unconventional it may be!!
However, a fantastic book so far.
Congratulations. Xx

I hope you update soon. Don't give up on this story it's very good!

Actually It was a stupid story but I enjoyed reading it.thank u for sharing

Loved those two chapters. I like how you managed the parents issue and the bathroom scene is really enjoyable. Great work! You gave me ideas for stories. I really should write more though. XD
See you next time. :-P
Cryss

Please update soon! love this story.

I am not sure whats wrong with me but I am in love with Max...I think its the whole being overpowered thing...I dont know. I love your style of writing too. When you are explaining her my heart aches for Jessica. Like my chest physically hurts. I want him to love her so much and I really want to know what the hell happened to Max to make him need this kind of love from a woman...with her terrified at the same time. I am so excited for another update...dont rush though...I can wait for something this good :)

I found this story awhile ago, when it was only like 12 or 13 chapters, I think. I had forgotten about it, and then rediscovered it recently. I love this, and I just want to say you are doing a great job. It is one of the better M/s/BDSM stories I have read. Most of those are just about sex, this actually has a plot, and the characters are developing nicely. I check back often to see if there have been updates, and I am never disappointed. I hope to read more in the future.

I just want to see them both be happy!! Haha, I don't want Max to completely become a new man but it would be great if he treated Jessica as an equal. I do enjoy how it is though now.

Loving this story!!!

I love this story. It is so well written! You are such a great writer. This and euphoria are my favorite stories. Please keep updating!