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November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love what you've established so far and I am keen to see where you take this. The story definitely has further to go and I'm sure many of your readers are in agreement!!! thanks for updating and looking forward to more!!!
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November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i rly wnt jessica to get hers back. i luv luv luv this story and war you've done so far but want that max dude to pay for what he has done to jessica. just hope she hasn't lost herself completely and dat she gets to exact sum kind of payback on max. maybe even similar to the same he did to her. now that'd be interesting. glad to hear ur continuing on. its great so far. want more though. can't help i'm greedy. thnxxxxxxxx n look forward 2 more.
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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!! Your back!! *dances* ok now to review! Her inner struggle is displayed beautifully. You've truly captured the turmoil of what she's experiencing vs what she's feeling. And the cliff hanger?!? Ughhh I want more now!! I also find myself wanting to see her in certain situations: her behavior when around friends, another women showing interest in Max, etc. the possibilities are endless. I honestly come here every other day looking for updates to your stories. Wonderful update :)
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November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you updated! This chapter was wonderful! It really isn't hard to see how she got into the vulnerable state that she's in, you did an excellent job of working through he emotions as each chapter goes. It's a bit hard to keep up with time in this story, so I do appreciate the occasional updates from he characters! I'm so anxious to see what you mean about this only being the beginning of the story! Thank you for coming back and updating :)
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love the depth you're giving these characters. They're becoming steadily more interesting and complete. I'm not sure exactly what it is about this story that is so intriguing, but I can't stop reading. Please don't leave us with this cliffhanger for too long!
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November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Halleluiah an update!!! I love your writing and I can't wait to see how this all turns out!!
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November 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I miss you and this story dearly. It actually is moving along very smoothly and not in any way rushed. Glad that they're on that stage of him allowing her to do a few normal things and I do understand why she's hesitant with the things she does. Now to see who's at the door. Maybe one of his friends, I doubt it's someone from the authorities.
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November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Updates for your stories soon???
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is amazing and so well written. Something you don't find in aff too often! I love the characters, even Max with all his psychosis! I hope you can update soon because I am hooked!
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August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!