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by DeathsDoll

person dazedandconfused
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I am so proud of her for trying to get away even though she failed she knows she tried. I am wondering why he was so nice to her by the end of the chapter after what she did to him but guess it's part of her training and some kind of mind control thingy. Resistance is futile!
person SlapNuts
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I love this story and always go for ones like it with bondage and angst. The more punishing the better, LOL. At least, she hasn't given up all hope and is fighting him. It's very well written and I hope you continue it with regular updates. Good job and hope to read more real soon.
person Crazy for Luving
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just found your story for the first time! It's nice reading a story where the victim just doesn't give in to her/his rapist and continues to fight back. She's one smart girl and I hope someday she does get away and helps the authorities nab this sucker!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, my heart is racing for this poor girl. I hope things get easier for her soon. Thanks for posting a new chapter and enjoy the rest of your week.
person DirtyLittleSlut
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you will be updating this story more often now..... Pretty please......

I wonder what other torture or rather training devices he has in that room and hope we will find out soon. I like her spirit and hope she keeps fighting him because that way he will have to punish her.............
person dazedandconfused
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I usually read only slash here on AFF but recently have discovered some very good Het stories similar to yours and have become addicted to them. I look forward to her training and whether or not she ever finds a way to escape before it's too late and she falls for her 'Master'. Good job!
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I must say I'm really interested to see how far this story goes. I love the darker side it has and I really cant wait for an update! Pls update soon!!!
person arweneveningstar
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
person Madison
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This has caught my interest so I hope you write more soon and I hope she doesn't fall for her captive but continues to fight for her freedom back.
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story. I like it.