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I am curious and am going to read the chapters over again in case I missed something but how did Jessica get abducted, where was she, how did they do it and get her out without being seen by anyone. I know she was probably drugged by Istvan (did he grab her too or have one of his goons do it) but would like to know more details about it and how she ended up bound naked to that pipe in the beginning. Who undressed her, etc.

Maximilian sounds like he would make the right kind of Master for a Sub so why not make it consensual instead of buying slaves? I think he might be lonely and maybe Jessica can find a way to his heart, who knows.

I am enjoying reading how he is training her but am proud of Jessica for having enough courage to try and stand up to him even at the expense of being possibly killed or severely beaten. Way to go , Jessica! Don't give up.

I was happy to see another update so soon.

Oh my gosh! He's treating her just like a dog, growlssssss, the fiend!!!! He's trying to take away her feeling of self worth and her humanity. Too bad she didn't knee or hit him in his crown jewels that would have taken him down!! Use her fingernails to gouge out his eyeballs.... I think I am too addicted to the Walking Dead, LOL. Lovely chapter and want to read more soon. Oh, and that's just too gross having some lick your feet or suckle on your toes, yucky poo.

I just wanted to let you know I am reading your story and love it. I am routing for her never to give up hope and that someday she will get away and back safely to her family. I do enjoy reading these type of stories although they are usually the slashy kinky kind, LOL. Anxious for next update, Katie.

thank you for the update

I was hoping she would have bashed his skull in but then the story would have been over and we wouldn't have gotten to more fun stuff. He's like a complicated puzzle that I am trying to piece together but haven't figured it out yet. I don't know how his mind words and it confuses me. He seems to really care for her in his own sick way. I believe things are gong to star getting very interesting and that he will have his hands full trying to tame her.

Well, this was a pleasant surprise as I wasn't expecting another update this soon. Thank you so much!

My own heart was racing through the whole scene with Jessica trying to escape and I was cheering her own but new deep down she wouldn't get away (at least not yet) but maybe some day. I felt sure Maximilian would have been more angry but he must have been expecting her to try something. I hope she doesn't give up trying and just bides her time for the right moment.

I really like your story! Thank you for posting another chapter. I feel really sad for the girl and want to punch the guy in the nose myself but she beat me to it.

omg i loved that!! I really liked her attempts at escaping and everything that followed after!! I really cant wait for another chappie coz I'm really interested in what happens next and I wanna see more moments between the two and more of her training and everthing! I'm loving it so far pls update soon!!

Goodness gracious, great balls of fire, I loved this latest update! I am so pleased she tried to escape and is not accepting her fate so he will have to keep punishing her, LOL. I love this and thanks for updating it so soon.

Awesome! I can't wait for him to really begin training her and use all sorts of fun bondage gear on her while he's doing it. She's going to prove a handful for him but he seems to enjoy it because then he can punish her some more and have a reason for it.