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by DeathsDoll

person arweneveningstar
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update!
person SlapNuts
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to admire Jessica for having the nerve to keep resisting Max but not at the expense where she is damaged beyond help. I like her way of thinking though and if she can pull it off maybe get through this and still keep her mind.
person guest
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update!
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
urgh I really liked this chapter. tho i hate that they are going to have to part lol. idk I just wanted to see more of them together. on the other hand i think it will be very interesting to see her with other people who are in that 'community' and just see her reactions and everything. I really cant wait for more every time you update im here begging for more. I really like your story and i cant wait to see what happens next.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like reading this story from Jessica's and Max's POV it makes it more interesting. I wonder how Max is going to explain his injury to his co-workers but maybe he can say he boxes or something and his opponent got the upper hand in the fight. Great chapter and thanks for updating! Enjoy the rest of your weekend!
person SlapNuts
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter and sense it's like an interlude of something bigger coming. I hope she doesn't get into too much trouble with his friend because she might find out Max meant it when he said he was one of the kinder masters. Jessica might think she can use her charms on his friend and then find out too late she was wrong.
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I am really beginning to think I am stupid because I am actually starting to like Max. Go figure.

I hope that he can trust his friend Ulrik with Jessica.

Very happy you updated this!
person arweneveningstar
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping maybe Jessica can try to get away while Ulrik is watching her but where would she run to?! I think Max might find himself falling in love with her and that will be his downfall. Great chapter!!!!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good morning! I was just getting ready to leave for my brother's house to celebrate Thanksgiving with my family but wanted to check in to AFF before I left first. I am glad I did.

I am so happy that she hasn't given up hope and is even planning in her mind to one day escape and for her tormentor to get put in jail. If he only knew, that she is smarter than him and she will have her own revenge one day. I love reading stories from different prospectives too.

I gotta run soon so will sign off until next time,

Katie.