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Oh my gosh this story is crazy good! Please update soon!!

I'm still reading this! I wanted to tell you I haven't dropped this; not at all.

I never thought to see get so heavy into this. Really want to see more of this world.

Its bad but part of me wants to see her break.

Well I'm going straight to hell so why not admit that.

curious is she going to figure out a way to speak to Max or is the new guy going to do so? I'm wondering how exactly is this story going to end up in the future.

fantastic-- one of my faves on this site. def hope you keep adding to it :)

When I first started reading this, I wasn't entirely sure how to feel about it. However, the more I read, the more I find myself entranced by the characters you've brought to life. This, along with your other story, is a wonderful read. You have a new fan, and I hope you keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Happy Holidays! I really liked Max this chapter as it showed a much softer side to him, in a way. Thanks for explaining that to me too! It's a very dangerous life he's living and now he's brought Jessica into it. I am still worried about what's going to happen when Ulrik shows up to watch over her while Max is gone but he does trust him. I like this chapter and thanks for updating!

Seriously can't get enough of this story. Update soon :) it's awesome!

Oh dear, I didn't know you had updated! This story is a battle of the wills between two strong minded individuals and I hope Jessica wins it. I liked this softer side to Max before he changed again. I am thinking maybe he was hurt really bad by a woman in his past and that's why he treats them horribly now. It's a sort of payback to whoever hurt him.

Is Max still going away on his business trip and is he going to tell Jessica? So, I love that she still has fight left in her but he almost took her spirit away in this latest update. I don't like to see victims fall in love with their rapist (and vice versa) but kind of hope they will. I hope Jessica can change Max for the better and that she does get away, he does go to jail but after he gets out maybe there will be hope for both of them. He has to admit he was wrong and I don't think he will ever be able to do that so it's just wishful thinking on my part. He's done this before and won't change. Thanks for the update!