rate_review Reviews

Still reading. I love your story.

please keep writing!!!!! I check everyday to see if its updated!!!!

AMAZING! You're writing is incredible. So glad you're updating so quickly! Keep it up please!! :)

Wow, you updated a lot quicker than I was expecting. I'm definitely not complaining. For some reason, it's not letting me stay logged into my account. Oh well.

With every chapter, I love your story more and more. There past couple of chapters have been a very nice change of pace with her suddenly being obedient. I enjoy how you're keeping these characters very believable with believable actions and reactions. Kudos to you. I'm honestly very torn with wanting Jessica to stay obedient and wanting her to rebel as well. Keep up the good work. I'm curious, though, on what you have planned out next. Will we ever get to see more of Max's friends with their slaves interacting with Max and Jessica?

Wonderful chapter and superb writing, as expected. I wonder how Jessica is going to react when she wakes up. Ahh! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter! :D When is the collar coming in?

I can't sign in damn. Oh well I can at least comment I think.

This isn't the end is it? Is there any more?

OH MY GOSH!! Please update soon! LOVE IT

Hey im really starting to get into the story so don't give up ok.

Oh my god!!!! I am so angry that he let this guy be by himself with her. I have to know she is going to be okay! Please write more like yesterday!!!!