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October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I read your note about partnering with gothguy25 and have been trying to read his story but seriously you should help him out with it because it's a mess and it's written like he's more a 15 year old than a 30 year old. It has promise but is poorly written and needs proofreading. I mean no harm just thought you could help him out.
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October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
They are certainly comical together! :)
I really liked this chapter - Kevin is feisty, I'll give him that. lol
I really liked this chapter - Kevin is feisty, I'll give him that. lol
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October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alex & Kevin are really cute together and make me smile. Nice chapter. I loved how Alex was 'tormenting' Kevin and bringing him to the brink... brim... blushes..... made him cum. I really don't see how Kent is going to become involved with them but am excited to see how it plays out.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That kid's parents should have been to blame, if he was even dehydrated, and the father should never have yelled at the poor waiter.... poor Alex! It's funny how some parents never take the blame for anything that happens to their kid or if they do something wrong, then they blame someone else for it. It's called responsibility! I really like Kevin but like Kent more and feel bad for him too. Has Alex met Kent yet? Can't wait for all three of them to become as one.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I just noticed you posted another chapter right after I left review. I was like, huh, what just happened how did I miss reading it the first time, dah, I am slow.
Ooooh, I didn't think Alex would be topping Kevin, that was unexpected and quite hot too.
This story is decidedly different than the original but I love it!
I am off to look at the new pics in your photobucket!
Ooooh, I didn't think Alex would be topping Kevin, that was unexpected and quite hot too.
This story is decidedly different than the original but I love it!
I am off to look at the new pics in your photobucket!
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just realized I messed up the names and got Alex and Kevin mixed up! Kevin is the police officer and Alex is the waiter! I've got it straight now, lol, sorry. Hey, at least I didn't call one of them Hunter or Ethan, ha ha.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now I know what it was Alex topping Kevin and it makes more sense to my addled brain now, lol.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What's the matter with me! I've gone and done it again! Alex is the police officer and Kevin is the waiter not the other way around. Holy poop!!!!! Me bad!!!!!!!!!
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I loved their first date. Alex is so freaking hot and the way he made Kevin cum and scream almost had me screaming out loud right along with him. Thanks for explaining that Alex is a city police officer and Kent is state police, and that Kent hasn't met Kevin yet at this point in story. Have a nice evening, Katie.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice chaps,well done