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for Matchmaker 2-Arresting Hearts

by 2rainsong2

person dazedandconfused
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on getting Honkey Tonk published!!!! I knew you could do it!!!! I am so proud and happy for you.

I wish that Kent had gotten out of his truck and not evesdropped on them. I wish Kevin did slap Alex because he really hurt him or rather broke his heart.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain, great news about Honky Tonk getting published by Amazon(?) and does that mean you will have to pull it from AFF? I am truly happy for you. I am so pissed off at Alex for not being able to come clean with his parents about who he really is. I am happy now that we have found out how Kent met Kevin even if the circumstances were not the best for it.
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so not going to end well. Yes, Kevin will see Alex and Lorna and totally get the wrong idea. But will Alex see Kevin? Or will Kevin leave beforehand? Or...Kevin will be at the bar drinking his sorrows away and Kent will walk in and there ya go.

Can't wait to find out what happens next! :) Oh, one thing for Alex: Tell your parents you chicken-shit! You are going to throw away the best thing that happened to you just b/c you're afraid of coming out to your elderly parents! Grow a pair and do it already! lol Ok, I've said my peace. Or piece. Can never remember which is the correct one. :)
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Alex is really in denial and needs to come clean with his parents especially his mom. It looks like he might just be doing that and soon like before they leave for the policeman's ball. I hope he will anyway. My heart goes out to Kevin but I am thinking the ball is where he finally meets Kent. If Alex shows up with Lorna, Kevin will probably figure Alex is not ready to commit to a relationship with him since he refuses to come out to his parents or the force. I am excited to find out what Kevin thinks of Kent the first time they see and speak with each other. Oh, maybe Robert and Lorna will get together at the ball.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I found that story that I thought was missing by gothguy25, it's back!!!!

I am bouncing on my feet anxiously waiting for the Policeman's Ball! I bet that Kent meets Kevin and they dance then Alex will get jealous!
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Heya, Rain! Congrats on your new writing partner and your new story! :)

I loved this chapter. Alex and Kevin are so sweet, and so is Lyle.

The chapter was very sad for me in a way b/c Chet reminds me of my nephew. My nephew is only 22 and he was diagnosed with some form of schizophrenia. (Is that spelled right? I'm too lazy to look it up.) Without his meds he's just like Chet, and unfortunately he doesn't think he needs them and he hates the way they make him feel, so he's not good with taking them at all. Alex and Lyle were very good with Chet.

Ok, on to the next chapter!
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I get to go into work later today, yippee!!!! But, that means I work later in the evening, drat!!!!!!

Oh, I looked at the new pictures of Kevin, Alex and Kent! These new guys are way too adorable.

I loved this new chapter and thought Alex's partner was really cool and very funny. I hope Alex comes out to his family (and friends/co-workers soon and wonder if he doesn't is that what will what direct Kevin to Kent.


person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great entertaining chapter, Rain. I loved this line; Remember I’m but a humble street cop in the presence of a Dim Sum Master, very cute. Oh, looking forward to you new story with gothguy25 and am excited about it.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain! I thought, gothguy25, had posted a story too and was enjoying reading it but it's disappeared! Do you know what happened to it? I really liked it too!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Rain. Alex has some issues to deal with and apparently one of them is his mother, lol. I love Lyle he's a riot. Oh, I think I found a typo and that you meant it was Alex's mom calling not Kevin's (see below) and when is Kent going to meet Kevin?

Chet was in the back of the car giving them both a lecture about how the government will steal their organs if they don’t watch out when Kevin’s mother called.