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for Matchmaker 2-Arresting Hearts

by 2rainsong2

person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was worth waiting for and you nailed it but I agree it must have been difficult writing it and not messing up Kevin and Kent's names like I know I have done in some of my earlier reviews but am trying to be more careful now. Oh, Kent and Alex finally meet! Well, almost......

By the way, I already love your new story 'Dark Cruise' and can't wait to read more of it.

Oh, and did you remove both Honky Tonk stores from AFF due to them being published? Just a suggestion but you might want to make a note the reason you took them down under your profile page and weebly account just in case anyone doesn't realize it.
person angela
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi dear

it was very good very hot

thank you for sharing your amazing stories with us
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain, if you have a mailing list started for Dark Cruise, please add me to it. Thanks!

I know Kent is going to be hurt as seen in chapter 1 so it's going to be painful when Kevin breaks up with him and takes Alex back. I hope Alex knows how lucky he is.

The sex between Kent and Kevin was really hot!
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just popping in real quick to let you know I read newest chapter! I am watching the Red Sox beat the crap out of the Cardinals!!! Go, Sox!!!! Go, Ortiz!!! Go, Dustin!! Go, Jacoby!! I love my Sox!!!!!! GO RED SOX NATION!!!!!!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, we already know that Alex and Kevin do eventually get back together but not how or when. Kent is so damned sexy that I don't know how Kevin didn't climb all over him or keep his hands off of that tight hot body of his. I know I wouldn't have been able to, lol. It's not like Kevin has been with Alex that long not to be able to establish a relationship with Kent. Anyway, lovely chapter as usual. Lyle seems to be a pretty smart guy and Alex is lucky to have become friends with him because it will probably be because of him that he gets back with Kevin.

Oh, and I really enjoyed the story by your new co-author but they haven't even mentioned anywhere about you and him partnering on a new story or stories. He should mention you somewhere, at least I think so.
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain!!!!!! I'm so excited for you!!!! Congrats on "Honky Tonk"! :) I hope it sells millions of copies!

This review is for the chapter before the last chapter: I felt so sorry for Kevin. Alex is just wrong. He's out of high school, he has a career, he doesn't depend on his parents financially, he really needs to tell them the truth. This is ridiculous. Look what it cost him. Kent just came along and will sweep Kevin off his feet if he's not careful.

Ok, on to the last chapter (so far).
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 20th on Amazon! Good for you, Rain! :)

Well, it looks like Alex lost his chance. Although of course Kevin still loves him; you just can't fall out of love so easily.

Can't wait for the next update! :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Rain, I love your new story with gothguy25, Dark Cruise, it's a winner!

I think Alex just blew it with Kevin and am happy that Kent was there to pick up the pieces. If he wants to make things right between them, then be better come out to his parents soon. He's going to have a lot to make up for. I just don't want Kent to be hurt but he's a big boy and knows what he's getting into.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Alex better take Lyle's advice and make a choice, the right one. I wish I could go on a long ride with Kent on his motorcycle. I wouldn't mind wrapping my own arms around his waist holding tight with the a cool wind blowing and his body keeping me warm, not at all, nope. I like that Kent is taking it slow with Kevin until he gets over Alex by giving him time. Have a nice evening, Katie.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, my curiosity is spiked; Kent gets a phone call that makes him smile and Kevin gets one he was not expecting. Does Kevin call Kent and Alex calls Kevin to break up with him because he is too much of a sissy boy to meet him face to face? If Alex can't tell his parents the truth then he is not man enough for Kevin and Kent should have him all to himself. I can't believe Alex is a police officer, he has no back bone. nil. Right now, I really don't like Alex but know that will change over time it's just because he's acting like a jerk and hurting Kevin. I am so happy for you and the good news about Honkey Tonk, WTG!