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Oh, oh, I think Alex's parents are not going to be very receptive of Kent and Kevin. Nice save by Lyle though. I nearly had a heart attack when Alex was shot! Oh my gosh. He's so lucky it didn't kill him. I liked seeing the softer side of Kent and wish more men would cry instead of acting like it's not a manly thing to do or something. Way to go, Tristan!

Yeah, we are back to events in chapter one, full circle and now will be moving forward so we can find out what happens. I liked how you described it was Christmas and Kent saw the truck they were in under the bridge and what they were doing it the back, lol. We already knew some of that but it was interesting to see it from his POV.

I hope Tristan does eventually meet with Kevin and bet they would become good friends. Oooh, any chance there would be like a six some instead of threesome? lol.

On a side note, it's not that I don't like your new story, Dark Cruise, but it took a different direction than I thought it would with the characters. In chapter one, I fell in love with Ben and his crazy group of friends including Trent. I thought it would be Trent and Ben that got taken and then Trent would change and find himself falling in love with Ben then they both would escape and end up being together. I think others thought somewhat the same way I did. I guess what I am trying to say is that I thought story would be focused on this one group of friends but in chapter two everything changed. I will still give it a chance but was slightly disappointed but not in you or Gothguy25. It was just me.

Rain, I disagree and think you have it wrong about your readers not liking your new story with gothguy. I was reading all the reviews and think your readers just misunderstood it, like I did, but you explained and I am fine with it now. Just give them a chance to get used to it. I don't think the problem is due to the dark content but more from reading the first chapter and thinking it was going to be about this band of brothers on a cruise of a lifetime but that it takes a downward spiral when three of them disappear. That's what I first thought anyway.

I am glad Alex and Kent came clean with Kevin but now he's pissed off at them which I don't blame him and he's confused by his feeling for both men. Alex better come clean with his parents and face his sexuality before it's too late. I hope the Tristan/Brandon/Gabe can help them.

It's really sad to see how bad Kent and even Alex are hurting over Kevin. I will be so damned happy for them when they get their act together. I don't think it will happen until Alex comes out to his family and those he works with. Maybe now that he's met Kent, he will. I don't think Kevin will stay mad at them too much longer and bet the make up sex will be worth it.

I don't think anyone really dislikes your new story or the dark theme and maybe you should re-read the reviews to see what everyone is 'talking' about that is bothering them about it so you can address it with them.

Heya Rain! I haven't checked out your new story with the goth boy, not b/c of your writing (which is terrifc, imo), but b/c I'm not a big fan of supernatural or fantasy/sci-fi type stories. Sorry...:(

But...I am TOTALLY loving THIS story!!! :)

So now Trent has a little voice in his head that's convincing him to think this threesome through. Of course, being that Kevin "hates" them both and Alex is so far in the closet he's in Narnia, (haha, I stole that from somewhere - probably you! lol), it might never work.

But it's worth a shot. Hey, you gotta takes risks in life. And what's the worst that can happen? They'll both say no and look at him like he's crazy! That's when Tristan and Co. should come in and introduce themselves. Then they can have a sixsome. hahah J/K Well, maybe not...

Terrific chapter, Rain! :)

Well, Rain - I have Sony repair on my speed dial b/c your hot smexy chapters keep burning up my screen! ;)

As much as Kevin loves Alex, he's certainly falling fast for the sexy Kent.

Oh, and I know what you mean about the Kent and Kevin...a few times I had to reread the names to make sure I had the right character. lol

Ok, on to the next chapter.

Oh shit, Alex and Kent were so bad!!!! Kevin's gonna know something's up b/c isn't he used to seeing Kent every day? And now he hasn't seen him in three days?

Can't wait for your next update, Rain! :)

hi dear

thank you so much for this nice story and also for your treat

Wow, talk about anger management issues, never expected this but did I ever enjoy it possibly more than Kent and Alex. Now, what is Kevin going to think when he finds out?

Trick-or-Treat and what a delicious morsel this was for a Halloween treat. Yummy. I don't think Kevin could have ever imagined Kent and Alex sampling each other like they did, I loved it. Now, they have to deal with the guilt and I wonder who will cave first and tell Kevin the truth.