rate_review Reviews

It's been 8 chapters and there is still very less we know about the characters themselves and wish the chapters were longer but if your frequent with your updates,i guess that it self solves the problem.Honestly i got confused quite a few times reading the 1st chapter but by the end of it I got the whole gist of the situation and the rest of the chapters were easy to understand.I really like to know who'll you pair with laheen and if its Copper then that'll be a delicious scandal ill love to read about:) and it would be great to read Copper's POV whenever laheen remove's his veil.

Love this story! It has the fun parts of the "arranged/political" marriage, but unique.
Interesting world and characters.

I am actually getting drawn into this story, very interesting start and I am sure to be following this.

Wish Laheen's husband actually played a bigger role in this story, and I am rather confused by Jean/Jenny....male or female? Very interesting story but at times veers off into hazy territory lol.

I like the story so far, and the way you are developing the characters. Keep it up!

The only thing I can say right now is one big WOW. I love this story,
it almost brought me to tears a few times while I was reading it.
I hope i won't have to wait too long to read the next chapter.
Keep up the excellent work. ;)

Great start! Interested to see where you'll take this. Did you update this all today!? Super fast and awesome! Excited for more.

Thanks for sharing this great story! Sad that the king is so determined to ignore Laheen, though...
Looking forward to more!

hi dear

it was great i hope you update soon

I think you are doing very well. I would have liked a little more "detail" in some spots but I like the story and I like your writing.