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October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Though I like that Preston seems to become more and more affected by Dominic, enough to even apologize for once, I wish we had a peek at what is going on in Dominic's head. And I dread what is to come, as I'm sure that Preston is going to remain knee deep in denial and do counterproductive things.
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October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how would Preston react if somebody else were trying to put the moves on Dominic. That would be interesting to read! Would his own jealousy surprise him, because technically they aren't a couple just fuck-buddies... something! So Preston really has no right to tell Dominic he can't sleep with anybody else if it's just sex between them and nothing else. Unless Preston starts demanding they become more than just fuck-buddies-something.
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October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. A "picky point" ... you may want to review the names used in the end of the Chapter it appears you have Dominic having a conversation with himself... I think some of those should be switched to Preston. :)4
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October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting dilemma Preston and Dominic are facing. Safe sex is very important to one's health and well being. I am relieved the principal is on to Preston's bullying and he should realize how lucky he is that Dominic didn't rat him out. It seems to me like the other teachers turn their eyes the other way when they see Preston and his gang tormenting other kids but this one teacher called him on it so kudos to him. Dominic is luring Preston in like a moth to a flame and I wonder if he realizes how much control he has over the bully of his H.S. Thanks for updating!
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October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At first I hesitated reading this story, but I'm glad I took the time to actually read this! I'm really liking this story so far and can't wait for more of this :D !
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October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far, I really enjoy the writing style and the characterization of both Dominic and Preston. It doesn't seem exactly like your ordinary bully-bullied relationship and that's refreshing.
I enjoy that Preston appears to really care about Dominic's consent in the sexual situations. I agree with Katniss, though, it seems like Dominic has more control over Preston than the other way around; it's a sneaky kind of control though that maybe he's not even aware of though~
Anyway, wonderful story so far; I look forward to more!
I enjoy that Preston appears to really care about Dominic's consent in the sexual situations. I agree with Katniss, though, it seems like Dominic has more control over Preston than the other way around; it's a sneaky kind of control though that maybe he's not even aware of though~
Anyway, wonderful story so far; I look forward to more!
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am beginning to believe that it's actually Dominic who has control over Preston and actually even like Preston even though he is the bully in the story. I like where this seems to be going and thanks for updating.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, can't wait for more. <3
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! You've started another new story and I am in love with it already. Preston is the H.S. typical jock but I think there might be a softer side to him lurking deep inside somewhere and maybe Dominic will bring it out eventually. I can't wait to read more and thanks for writing it.