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for Hypnotic

by Cia

person makosira
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is actually turning out to be my favorite of your Carthera stories as well~

I've been curious about the snake carthera since they were first mentioned and described. And Davis is just such an interesting character.

Can't wait to read more. c:
person Jjon
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So very happy you keep going with another sequel, can never get enough of your fabulous stories!
person SlapNuts
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this story rocks! I love anything with snakes and humans mating especially the male species. There is not enough of them around so thanks!
person Saskia
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story! I hope we know who has spread the disease on the cathera's and they can be stop!! the relationship of Cavel and Bashta and the baby girl. because the ending was to sudden but a good ending!! keep up the good work! i hope to read chapter 2 soon!

Good luck your fan
person Andrea
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, nice beginning! I already like the atmosphere and the settings of your new story. I somehow also prefer when you write in first person but that is maybe just a question of personal taste. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of my favorites of all of your stories! I read it under your web site. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews for what you have posted to date here on AFF because your stories are simply the best ones around and very well written.
person afan
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great, I am a fan of your other two stories before this one, loved them, am sure I am going to love this as well, thanks for writing on...
person hedrospeda
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another one! I was really hoping this would be about the snake and it is. *jumping up and down while squealing* I am a huge fan of the work you have here and already love your new characters!