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for Hypnotic

by Cia

person JiminiC
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so loving this!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Benny! Poor Ellis why did he attack him and I wonder what Dav will do to his friend for attacking his mate.
person Hhenri
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay so now I am truly hooked, hit me with more please!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cia, please if you have a mailing list for updates to your stories please add me to it. My heart literally ached for Ellis and I was so angry with Dav that I wanted to skin him alive for what he tried to do with his mate. Why didn't he at least question him instead of judging him and finding him guilty just because the person on the video looked like Ellis? How would he have felt should he have killed him and then saw the scar after the fact? Thank God for Dr. Pannar, who was the only one who gave Ellis the benefit of the doubt and knew he could never hurt someone let alone kill them. If I was Ellis, I would probably never forgive Dav for what he tried to do no matter how much he begged for forgiveness. ~ Katie ~
person SlapNuts
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I love this Carthera world you have created. It really has sparked my interest especially this story about the snakes species.
person ailuv
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You nailed it, this story is captivating and hypnotic....lol....love all your stories!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cia, this is a very beautiful story and I feel for Dav and how he was ostracized and rejected which led him to not being able to trust someone again until Ellis. Ellis is very special and I hope Dav treats him like the special and kind person he is. ~ Katie ~
person Bunny
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Obsessed.
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you posted this story here and know it's the 3rd in your series but it's also my favorite. I love this one! Ellis and Dav are so hot together! Your new readers who don't know what's going to happen are in for one hell of a thrill ride. I hope you will write more stories like this particular one because there is something about snakes that fascinates me.
person Penny
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Cia, I'm a huge fan of your stories, so well written, interesting plot lines, wonderful characters and romance. What I don't understand is why so few reviews, it's not right. More reviews for Cia guys! Come on!