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for To Protect and Love

by WishingonWishes

person Kat
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I truly love your story!
It's weird how much heroes who become villains for the sake of others fascinate me it it's done right, and yours certainly is :)

Now please tell me where the brothers were when Callum was a kid and why didn't the father call for them? Why didn't they hep him? What's his plan for the brothel thing? And about 100 other questions....

Just don't stop posting pease!
person Kat
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More? Pleeeeaaaase?
I love it so much! Please please write it all as quickly as possible or I think I'm going to die of frustration XD
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love this ;) So glad you posted it up! I know you were really shy about it and I'm super proud of you ;)

You know I love Callum. I can't believe you! attempting the handwritten to typed conversion.

I did notice a few errors and typos- ever instead of never and others instead of other's.
Otherwise awesome job. I'm sorry no one else reviewed for you but don't be disheartened. I love it anyway :)
Love always, Jamesy <3333
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS XD
I feel so sorry for Callum, and I his father is a monster.. he deserves endless torture for what he does to Callum and his mother. Please update soon!I cant wait to read what happens next!